You are such a wonderful writer. I've been told that my own fics are great. But then I read stories like this and the others you have written and feel like an total amature who should hang up his wordprocessor and give up writting. Great fic!

Again, as the message of these two ficlets demonstrate, words fail to allow full comprehension to dawn at times. To have included much more than you had would have cheapened the effect, and I'm glad you and I share the same belief on this matter. Wootage.

You know... I never review and I never rate (and that's because I've read all H/Hr fics at Portkey...), but this one (and its prequel) deserved it. You're wonderful! It was just amazing you could describe their feelings without the normal "I love you" fluff... I think I'm going to make you my deity or something. Nice job, keep it up. ^_^

Excellent!!!

As you already know, through my other reviews, I love it! *sounds like a broken record* I find it amazing everytime how you weave all these literary styles to create a fantastic story. I can't wait for another from you.

Omg! that was like total crap, what were you thinking u freak of nature! *tear* just joshing u lor, that was so b-e-a-utiful! just the fluffy stuff yaeh just as I requested but seriously hun are u afraid of ... SEx! heeeheehehe..........Insane in the mebrane..Insane!..Got no brain!
Luv u 4 ever
Kate Meheelee

I liked it a lot! Fluff can get a little too sweet for my taste, but this one was really good... not too sweet, just right and everything. I love your description of the kiss, very passionate

Keep writing!

Oh, that was so great! Don't stop here, write another one!

Man, if only it would happen like that...

Damn, that was good. Great job on this one-shot. They don't seem out of character which in this fic is a good thing. Good job. Keep up the good work.

What a beautifully written piece. The imagery was fantastic and the way it flowed emphasised the emotions involved. Thanks a lot, for an uplifting bit of reading. Please write more soon.

Toodles

Hand of God

Oh My God!!! Thank you lord, thank you lord, thank you lord. Finally someone doens't write the whole " i love you Hermione, I love you too Harry" thing. Don't get me wrong its sweet and all but seriously there is only so many times you can read it and not think wow is that corny and obvious. I read this one and the autumn one and again i would just like to thank you for an actual meaningful story. The way you write is amazing you must be in college or something to that extent. I have every intention of reading your other stories as soon as possible. Again thank you so much for a really really good ( fantasticly written) story. For the sake of mankind never stop writing!!!

alicia

Wow! Siuch an excellent mechanical structure! Thank you for giving us fans a great fic to read. I am a writer myself and I have never seen such a masterful mechanical structure (**I take it a little too sedriously** I look mostly at it and not grammar errors) Great work! Will you be writing any more?

Caroline

Always love your stuff. Not too fluffy . . . just right!

Somewhat short but it's okay. I love the imagery that you use very well done! I wonder though if your going to continue with this series. I hoe you do.