i have a question.

the potion/elixir - whatever. Will hermione only live a week? or does she get to live with snape's essence in her until a natural death?

i'm debating with a friend about this - he says she will only live a week because snape says something about the elixir lasting only a week or something and after that if harry doesn't decide snape will commit suicide?

i tell you - i love this fic. i wish it could have gone on longer but i have to tell you i like it a lot for some reason. i love hermione in this. she's just - this is what has to happen. That's it. You know what you need to do...i'll always love you - now do it.

and poor harry. he does it. even after realizing how much he cares for hermione.

SO - again- does she live until naturally dying or does she only live a week?

GREAT writing!

i wish i saw more from you.

melissa
acoustics1220

OK OK i see how it serves better as a one shot. and a terrific one it is like a quick right hook, you almost hold your breathe while you read it. However i am slightly confused. Did harry really kill hermione? (because they was a small suggestion that it was not her just another voldermort trick) and how did he get from the hospital wing to "by her side"? and if she were killed how come she wasnt mentioned in harry's thoughts of who to bring back earlier in the story? please bare with me, maybe i read it to fast to comprehend it i wouldnt know my heart is still beating rapid and heavy. anyway please get back to me! i am so enchanted by your writing it has this difference, an eery awe. anyway, lata.

Wow....just....wow.

OMG Voldie is so evil, he makes me sick! I just hope he doesn't do anything like that for the books! I hate him! Great story!

Oh...wow... I'm in awe - this gave me shivers! This is an excellent piece - very poignant and touching. *laughs* And even if you know nothing of Kepler's law, then at least the rest of us got to pause in our days and read a smashing good fic. I wouldn't exactly recommend continuing this (I think it's most excellent as a poignant one-shot wonder. If you continue, it might spoil the magnificence of it in bogged down details).

A great read, though. Bravo.

~Athena

I hope you add more, you really can't it like that. thats just mean.

ohhhhhhh ya more would be great awsome one shot ot not so cool i love it mroe pelase so cool

It ended more powerful than it started.

Ow, please, continue this...Please!!

Interesting concept, thank you.

How bitter sweet this story is, yet wonderful. PLease more.

dark, just how i like them

Whoa! That was certainly unexpected. Bravo for Snape giving his life so Mione could live.