hey, that's a cool one, but I think you shouldn't write a prequel or a sequel. I mean, we already know what happens before, and if you don't mind me saying, for once, I don't want to know what Draco does; what he chooses. But, what I would like to know is the name of that poem. So, if you get around to it, could you please write me with the title? Thank you.

weeeee!!! this is so so so good! i wanna know what happened during those late nights hehe...and we need a SEQUEL!!!!

so lovely...I loved reading this....wonderful job!! I love the song too!!

pls write more ~M

This is great bud. It'll be weird to quote here, but here goes--

>>Years of similar ‘character building’ as his father had called it trained him to except the pain and move on.

I think you mean 'accept and move on'.

>>You will obey his command- You will take the mart!

Do you mean mark? Sorry to point out your mistakes, but nobody else was and just saying you had mistakes so... yeah.

>>He stood there immobile in the snow; uncertain of which way to go.

I think we all know which way we want him to go. Anyways, I liked this. I'm reviewing here because my computer is being stupid and not opening the review board for FA. Bye now! ~Lexi

i love that poem! thanks for reminding me of it! watch for little spelling errors but it's great! i'd love to see more!

I love the use of the poem. Good work!

Very poignant. I'd be interested in reading more should you chose to continue

I've always loved this poem. I also love Robert Frost's poem 'Fire and Ice' which could really describe Ginny and Draco!

You should definitely do a prequel/sequel. There were a couple of spelling errors so maybe a beta reader would help. Apart from that, really interesting - there haven't been too many fics that I've read that have centaurs in them.

that was really good!!

I liked your stroy very much and you incorporated the poem quite nicely into approapriate places within the text; however, you might want to do a more thorough spelling check.