Hello, I really liked this little piece. I also read the first four chapters of "Out of the Shadows and into the Night" and I think that you should incorporate more POV's from Dumbledore and Snape into the story, it just makes it sound better. Anyway, Please update "Shadows" soon! I really like that story, even though it's a bit Star Wars, it's still pretty good. But, I can understand Ron doing this, just how his life is.
Anyway, please consider my idea and good luck finishing your story!

This was pretty good. I never did like Ron very much though i never really thought he'd go to the dark side. Well scratch thta i did i just neve thought about him very much

ok now this is really smart of you .for ron to betray harry whould be ,well your all saying no way ron is apart of the trio .well like said in the story ron wontes to be the senter of attention sometimes hey who dosent but he has hermione with her smatness and harry with his fame that grows each year he defeats voldermort that whould push the desire[sp?]to be in the spotlight even further.so if you think about it it makes perfect sence .i can see it now on the daily profet hermione and harry potter are the potters were recently betrade by their best friend of --[i dont know how many years 12,14,15 you choose]years and fellow hogwarts student when he burged in their house and threatend to kill their baby girl soukwea[soo-kwe-a its for an fanfiction im working on ok.]if harry and hermione did not give theirs lives up to he most not be named.the potters were rescued when sirus black and remus lupin appeared and ron left afraid of beying over come by the numbers.yada,yada,yada... well you really got it gowing pleas update .





HISTORY REPEATS ITSELF.



i know sirus did not kill lilly and james but you get the flow.

Fairly good. No - shippiness though Please have some more shippiness.

I remember reading this, but got disconnected before I could review. *beats his dialup connection*



I reallly like your fics. This was no exception. The way The Snape/Dumbledore conversations worked - it was very good. I get the feeling that the H/Hr might suffer in the end becuase of Dubmbledore's attitude. I'm pretty sure that You're one of those authors that don't have the concept that all that Dumbledore says is going to happen.



And that scares me.



I really hope nothing terrible happens.



In terms of little things like style and plot and grammar and things like that : I don't really have to comment. You are one of the best I've read



PS: I am really looking forward to the next one ! NC17! YAY!

I love this story. I also read the first one too. The idea of Ron betraying Harry and Hermione isn't that surprising to me, he can be quite petty at times. I really want to know how this turns out.

Yes I like this story very much when is the next installment today?

very, very interesting. i've read a few stories that were similar in plot, but the written quality of this story is very eye-catching. can't wait for upcoming chapters.



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