Exquisite and wonderful writing style. I like the theme you kept up with silence and the stillness... very appropriate. You mixed in a very possible situation that could have occured outside of canon that I enjoyed a lot (it's H/Hr, isn't it?) and you conveyed the emotions really well! I loved it! One of the best pieces that I have read in a long time.

I really liked that. I loved how you kept on repeating the title. Great job.

Wow. The first part made me cry. Damn you!!! this was wonderful!

awwwwwwwww! I usually don't like any angst stories, but this one has got to be one of the best angst I've read. My compliments to the chef!

Megan

very good!

that was such a sweet story.

Beautiful!!! It made me cry when Harry was trying to get her to wake up! Great job!

please contunue so awsome

This is a really sweet story about what SHOULD have happened in the Order of the Pheonix. I was re-reading it last night and maybe it's because i have been reading too much fanfiction but he doesn't even mutter an apology in the book. Even after what happened with Dolohov!!!
Ok, now i'm just venting anger.
Kudos to you
Update soon
~ Creepy Susie

That was a great story...thanks.

I've got tears in my eyes....i'ts so beautiful!!Is more coming?? PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASSSSEE say there is more!!!!

That was good! Keep up the good work!

Great job...clean and sweet...you did a very good job of delivering the goods...emotion and reason combined to make a great story...is there more?