oh, goodness, this is definately a favorite. A FUCKING FAVORITE.
That epilogue killed. I feel that tight knot in my throat adn I can't open my moth right now bc i'd feel the worse. This was such a wonderful story. different pov of what could've been and what it was. and goodness, never have i read such a dark fic where they suffered so much but they loved at the end. they loved and where loved. i freaking loved it. thank you. thank you.

and I love Harry with everylittle piece of me. He is a great man, even after his faults, the sins he's done. wonderful read. i shall continue. :]

you break my heart to a million pieces.
to tell you thetruth, i had something of this sort in mind, but not that they would turn muggle. ijust thought they were foing to grant them forgiveness and let them go. but now, they'll live like muggles. dear, i want more.

oh, dear. heart wrenching stomping breaking any hope left.
loves. loves. and it kills.

aw, god. Harry is illing me. goodness, he is such a wonderful man. i want to love him for letting the baby be. *I love you Harry!*
and then, the joke is on the dementors. teary over here. :[

But a new and, in its way, even more terrible sound had drawn them at the last: The sound of wild, insane laughter.


Holy cow. this is madness. true madness at its making. ihave no idea how ou're going to end this fic. but i want to know. and i'll continue reading.

holy fucking shit!
this is crazy. and so sorry for the language but i write my first reactions. ammazing.

O_O shouldn't this in the very least be a PG 13? Especially the first chapter...

Very deep story, the only argument I have is that Hermione was never presented with either the choice or the knowledge that the baby was only biologically hers and not Harrys. I have no doubt what her choice would have been but the fact remains that it was her body and fooling someone on such a grand scale shows not only a great deal lack of respect for Hermione but a great inner Faulkner in Harry (Faulkner coined the theology of saving the majority over the minority no matter the cost. It is a very respectable view to have on life but, in my opinion, is an ultimately emotionless point of view.)

Your writings are absolutely addictive. Off now to get a stronger fix

Using Neville? I didnt see that one coming..Well written as i have said before! Where do you get your ideas? Well have fun writing or whatever it is you do during your spare time?
R.T.

Using Neville? I didnt see that one coming..Well written as i have said before! Where do you get your ideas? Well have fun writing or whatever it is you do during your spare time?
R.T.

I cried on this one. The final words in this was touching! Oh i hope you have written other stories as good as this. (How do you think you would do on a slash??)
R.T.

The ending in this one was very sad. I wonder do you edit your own stories? You grammer, punctuation, and spelling(as far as i can tell) are very good. Do you write often?
R.T.

Very well written. You had the spirit of anguish well engraved into your story. I look forward to reading the rest of it.
R.T.