Long chapter!
Hilarious, though. I don't know if I'm hoping for a Ron/Fleur or a Ron/Lavender. I'm thinking the second, but I guess I'll have to read and find out.
Great story!
-mel |
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excellent story. I enjoyed it thouroughly. keep up the good work. |
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Oh my lord, I had to bite my lip to stop from laughing at Sirius's reply (which would have woken up my fiancee). This is a great story. |
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chelley83Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 11/11/07
said i was going to add you and forgot to do it  feel like a royal dummy but oh well stuff happens |
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chelley83Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 11/11/07
i really loved this story...in fact i've read almost all of your stories so i think i'm going to add you to my favorite authors list considering i've enjoyed each and every one of them  thanks for sharing them with us |
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DrakeSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 27/08/07
Absolutely delightful! Lighthearted, cute- just an all around great story. I quite enjoyed it. |
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MaDeLaiNeSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 20/11/06
I can't rmember if I reviewd this one, but I LOVE IT! lol.. So much that I'm going to reread it as soon as I come back from classes, lol.
Thanks for sharing! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/04/06
this was a very good good good good good good good |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 09/03/06
The way you have managed to write this is so descriptive and wonderful that it actually got me exited about reading it. Something that has not happened in a while. I would just like to say, that i found Hermione act a little cold towards Ron, considering that they are also best friends although it's only because they share a common bond, Harry. Wonderul, delicious story, thank you.
PS: The detail of Hermione's mannersism and that scene with Croockshards(can't spell it) was just lovely. Seldomly do we get a story that takes teh time to mind the little moments rather than get stuck with the big picture. |
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Very good and nicely written absolutely love the prank they pulled on Malfoy and how everything worked out quiet nicely for everyone can't wait to read some more of your stories well ta ta for now |
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skyaceSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/12/05
Well, okay. Maybe not UnrequitedLove!Hermione. The only part that really could be more was Hermione's change of attitude when Harry said the "too much time together for friends" part. The rest could be really good friends I suppose. |
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skyaceSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/12/05
Wow. I think you've got the classic Clueless!Harry and UnrequitedLove!Hermione down quite well  |
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some excellent writing, and story telling here - thank you.
The Snitch has been on my favorite story list for a long time, and it goes to the top for everyone I pass a copy to - thanks for your work. it is very erotic while remaining tender and loving. |
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khush51Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 06/12/05
When are you updating this story. I want to know what happens over the course of the school year, and this Valentine's day suggestion. |
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