SevenSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 20/03/10
A lovely story. You write extreamely well and in a fluent pace! Nice job! |
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 I\'m so happy for that Harmony ending!
Sigh. Perfect. The angst and romance and Cho\'s part was absolutely top notch.
I\'m off to read your other stories.
Keep writing! |
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“I need him, mum,” desperation cracking my voice. “I don\'t know. I just need him.”
SQUUUUUEEE!!!
Aww ... It\'s a perfect line for Hermione.
And her mother was so understanding too. It made me want to cry.
In a good way of course. |
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After reading the first chapter, I had to know what's going to happen.  I wasn't able to review for the first one (because you and you're too-good-yet-extremely-inspirational writing distracted me).
I just want to tell you that it was brilliant. Neville and Ron were definitely in character, and Hermione reacted the way I expected her to.
I'm off to read your other chapters - I'm crossing my fingers for some Pumpkin Pie soon.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 18/01/10
your story just keeps on getting better and better....is it just a matter of time.... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/01/10
as usual your storys as enjoyable as ever all of them r believable and completely in charachter..... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/10
I absolutely love it h/hr is so plausible and believable 2 me.... |
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Fire_Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 13/06/09
Beautiful poigant story! A lovely read that touched my heart! The ending was just PERFECT! The way she knows everything about him before he says it, and your descriptions were just so beautiful especially about the part that he looked so relaxed but she really knew the havoc going on in his mind!
The kiss? It was the sweetest thing ever, and I loved the fact that she finally realises what they've been trying to tell her! Great job! I really REALLY enjoyed reading this! Absolutely beautiful story! |
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Fire_Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 13/06/09
Are you kidding me? This chapter was BRILLIANT! And I honestly can't think of any other words, just wow, the stark emotion in it, and the voice in the writing is beautiful. The prose is GUH! Just gorgeous! What I love is the comparison between Hermione and Cho how Cho just doesn't want to know and Hermione she's willing to stick through hell for Harry! *sighs* Your writing is beautiful! |
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Fire_Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/06/09
Aww! That was a sweet talk! I can't wait till she sees Harry, like I said everyone but those two  Acceptance is the first step! |
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Fire_Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 13/06/09
AWW! This was so sad and sweet at the same time, I'm glat it wouldn't leave you alone! Seems like everyone but Harry knows it, ay? Aww I love when Ron goes all serious *huggles* him.
Oh god, one moment you having me touching my heart (not literally just like ... yeah hehe) and the next I'm laughing "Is this a penis metaphor" LOL. Just LOL.  Off to the next chappie! |
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Fire_Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/06/09
Interesting beginning! I love the idea of Neville telling Hermione about that part in OoTP! Such a pivotal scene! Poor Hermione, cooped up in the hospital wing and all this to think about!
"Just know that one day you may have to step back from a fight for Harry’s sake as well as your own.” Such a powerful line! Off to read the next chappie  |
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AshUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/06/08
Now why didn't JKR think of that? To let hermione know what Harry's reaction was to her attack? oh dear. I liked this chapter very much, very compelling writing you have going on here, quite emotional yet conventional. great work! |
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wow great story! i like the way you wrote it, so simply but really getting to the emotional bits of everything...really angsty! thanks for writing! |
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Angel 737Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 06/10/07
 That was soo sweet! It has got to be the most cutest fic ever!
I plan on reading more of your fics!! |
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