Wow, I really enjoyed that. The scenes are so lovely squees happily

Oh my goodness. These four chapters have been brilliant. Your style of writing amazes me. Please keep writing like this.

Miss Mady

That was wonderful. So well-written. So beautifully crafted. As wonderful as any one-shot can be. Please keep it up.

Miss Mady

that was good i really liked it way to go i like how you make the reader mad when they are and sad when they are great story

This truly is one of the best stories I have read yet. Brilliant piece of work you've got here. I'd have to say my favorite scene in this one is their arguement in the common room. The emotion you throw into the mix is real ... and RAW. Very, very good job, and Ii hope you start writing again sometime!

What was that!!!! I don't understand is it that Harry and Hermione is over or that it just never was them in the first place? huh? Now even I'm lost like them.

I like that you didn't simply write the "and they lived happily everafter" story, and I actually thought that the idea of having them smoke, was an interesting way to humanize H and Hr. This entire story though seemed like angst for angst's sake, and became a bit dull to read. The characters in this story were really OOC. It reminded me of the last season(s) of Buffy at times, where characters that I loved started grating on the nerves, and I just wanted to knock some sense into them.

Wow. That story was so beautiful. It gave me chills. Everything,-- every reaction, every emotion, every touch-- I could completely see it happening. Amazing. Great job.

hey i read this story awhile ago and to be honest i loved it then. Then I decided to read it again because i love me some smut. Did you make any changes to this? It seems different. The ending seemed a bit different too. I like it better if you did change it. If not I remembered it wrong and this new memory is 100 times better. The story is great and its funny i read this because it makes me feel. Harry and Hermione not feeling makes me feel, weird?

Awwwwwwww!! That's so damn cute! I love it. It makes my heart swell. Etc. You get the gist of it.

Drowning, eh? that's so heartfelt. I can't wait to see what happens next!

oh wow! that's amazing! I can't wait to see what happens next.

F-ing fantastic! Great angst (lots of it) and some nice smut to boot.

Thanks!

Wow, great beginning! I love the way you've made Harry complicated as well as Hermione. Great Job

I really like this story. It's very, very good! I'm definitely adding it to my favorites list