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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/02/04
its cute but confusing because you dont know if they are thinking or talking
Author Feedback: It's a little from column A, a little from column B. It's a style of writing I like to use sometimes- a bit different and all that.
 

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michou
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/02/04
i love it
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/02/04
*sniff, sniff* very good
 

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danielerin
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/02/04
I love that song, and what a great angsty story. Good job!
 

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Miri (from CoS)
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/02/04
This made me cry! They really did seem totally lost without each other. I'm wondering if maybe Harry was following her though - a chance encounter after 7 years? Going up to her took a lot of guts, and he didn't seem at all surprised to see her to me.

The changing viewpoint was slightly confusing, and I wasn't always too aure what Harry thought and what he said, which is why i'm rating 9 not 10.

I loved the line "It may have been seven years, but there was seven before that."
 

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KypDurron
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/02/04
So sad.

Seven years? Dayum!

BTW, how did Ron die? Was it Voldemort?
Author Feedback: He just died I enjoy killing Ron off in unknown ways because, to me, he's pretty useless.
 

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