Wow, that was really good. You know I sometimes like reading some fluff, but I hate when it comes to "I loved you since I was eleven"-stuff where they jump at each other after that statement and it's really great to reed something deeper.

That was sooo weird!! But I liked it! It was a very creative story...it made me confused! Keep up the great work!

As you said, it illustrated pure devotion. Who needs a kiss when they encompass the comfort of the embrace, for both people in the couple, so well? It's excellent, and it's nice to have a fan fiction that leaves you guessing every once in a while.

Wow. Amazing. I love it. I certainly can't wait to read the next chapter.

I relally loved the twist. Never saw it coming! I am anxiously awaiting chapter three. Alorkin

I absolutely enjoyed it. Wonderful tale you've woven here. Great job.

Bloody hell! That was soooooo sweet! Although confusing but........

Yup! Sweet.........!

omg...i was at complete shock! at first i didn't get it but now, it is really clear.

wonderful sotry Lauren!

Hiya!!!!thanks a bunch for writing this story, I think that you transmit what you want, so please, go on wrinting things like this above...and one more time, congratulations

Mind boggling. That's all I can say. Absolutely, positively mind boggling.
I normally don't enjoy fanfics under 10,000 words, but your story has completely changed my views on the potentials of short stories.
The great twist in the story simply tore away my sense of reality as I struggled to keep up with what was going on. Add this with the story's cohesion, which was only apparent once I had finished reading the entire fic, and you have a story that challenges the minds of all Harry Potter fans.
This story is, to say the least, truly in a class of its own.

It didn't exactly make much sense but good none the less.It was really different. Not too bad.

Interesting chapter. Nice starting to this two parter. Keep up the good work of writing HP fics. You're pretty good a writer.

That was so good. I like the way you leave it open to interpretation and I'm almost positive that I get it. And, as far as I'm concerned, that ending was solid gold. It's not fluff and gifts and broom rides, it's what's left. Beautiful.

This intro seems very surreal, kind of detatched. It feels like a silent film. That is so *good*.

WOW..
Awesome ending. great story... I Think I am going to have to add this to my favorites. YOu wrote it beautifully. It kept a very dream like quality, yet did not seem dream like. Does that make sense? Anyway, wonderful job, and hope to see more
avalon