Ha ha! That was a really good story. I hope that you write some more. =)

this was such a great story about james and lily!! it's really inspiring me to write about them!! i just find their whole relationship so cute and perfect... great job!!

I've really liked reading your fic. It doens't surprise me that is one of your favourite fics, it's well-written and very enjoyable. I liked the way you wrote it, as if it were a fairy tale.
You know, ever since I've read the fifth book I've wondered how did James and Lily end up together when she used to find him so annoying (and he was).
I'm a huge fan of LJ ship, but it's very hard to find good stories about them, many writers tend to turn them into Mary Sue-s. I'm glad to say that you didn't, and that your is one of those few good stories about them.

i totally TOTALLY luved it!!! it was the funniest thing ever! keep writing!

This story still makes me grin. Glad to see it here in Portkey.

Would you be interested in joining the new L/J Round Robin? We'd welcome any feedback, and story contributions even better!

Please check it out here:
http://talk.portkey.org/index.php?showtopic=6082

cute

Very nice job. I love how Peter won the bet and how Lily had to eventually ask James. I love it.

That was very cute. I liked it a lot.

Very cute!! A lil' short, but very very cute! lol. I only wish it had been longer. Great work.. I hope you write a new fic soon.

wow. it sounds like a short movie.(which is good)

omg this is the cutest lj fic i have ever read...

This was really refreshing for me - I don't know, it was like taking a nice hot shower... away from the cold... and then getting out and wrapping a fluffy robe around you... Ooh, so warm...

*blinks*

Anyway, I loved this. It was really funny! (lol-ed a few times - my mother thought I went insane) I really loved how you portrayed Lily and James's attitudes towards one another. It made me smile.

And I don't usually stop to read L/J fics, so...

ROFLOL. Fantastic job.
-Lauren

I enjoy your writing style. No wait. I don't enjoy it. I ADORE it. And your characterization of James was not only believable, but original as well. What an excellent break from the "James asks Lily out so many times that she finally gives in and then realizes she loves him" fics OR (even worse) the "James asks Lily out so many times that she finally realizes that she loves him and then goes out with him" fics.
Kudos!

This was fantastic! I loved the simple descriptions. They show more than what you had told. Wonderful! I enjoyed it immensely!

I never read James/Lily, it gets weird later reading the books, but this is and and I the whole time. So