no it's not good.. it's BRILLIANT! EXCELLENT! hahaha.. still one of my favorite short fics here.. shh.. don't tell any one, but this is my most fav here heheheh.. whenever i feel frustrated or sad about something, i'll just read this and sure enough, will bring smile on my lips. nice job!

I think this could've been what really happened. I loved it. Very much on-character, all of them.

how adorable i love it! So cute! I love your little one-shots! post more
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This was a really sweet story. And Peter ended up with the 20 galleons. Very nicely done.

Has got to be one of my absolute favorites. I adore it. I read it over and over again because it makes me laugh and it's very sweet.

the plot is good, but you've made it sound a bit dull, the sentences are too short. Express the emotions a bit more, and it'll be perfect.

well, this was the first story i read but couldn't help myself to read it again, and again, and again. geeze.. on second thought, i can't think of how many times i've read this story... it's very simple and direct yet it's really fun reading it... and i like the way james get back to her...

it's really well-planed smooth story! i really like it a lot... even told my friends to read it... good going zettazofia! five thumbs up!!!

Simply splended. Nice. Really. If all fanfics were this uncomplicated, then I'd have read all of them.

"and life was pretty darn cozy for the couple."
.....until voldemort come around to them and their kid, and decided to have a go a them and killed them all. Their kid marked for life, and forced to kill voldemort. But otherwise, yeah, life was good.

lol. Sry just couldn't resist. But without my immuture ending, you story was great.

Ummmm...what? Sorry. You didn't say whether you preferred us being nice or not so here goes...: you need to work a lot on your work ok? Not bad for a beginner though, just pretter un-Harry Potter-ish. Sorry if you find this offensive, but I've read some of your other works, and you've done better...good luck!
--SilentIller
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hahahaha, thats really silly, but it is hilarious, i love your sirius, so typical, great job. i love this style of writing, almost like pointform or timeline-ish, it just makes it funnier.

ahah i loved this fic, it's so simple but friggin hilarious. haha you know what? whenever james tries to fight a grin, i try to do it with him, but it never works LOL.

oh dear. this is completetly lacking in literary devices and you have horrible sentence stuctures but something about how hilarious this peice is tells me that that is exactly the point!!! hehehehe. Nice job. Absolutely hilarious! i'd love to read more of your work.

Good story!!! I loved it!!! I loved the humor!! It was a bit out of character though, but overall, amazing story!!!