that poem is the book 'The Outsiders'by S.E. Hinton. thats wut drew me 2 ur story. its a great poem really; sad yet ful of hope. great fic so far keep writing.
PEACE ~LilyFlower~

ps: u should read 'The Outsiders' its a great book and maybe it'll give u an idea 4 another fic. i'd enjoy reading that.

Great story! I can't wait to read more! Those dreams are veru interesting!
Tina

Unique storyline. Very well done.I like the mix of mystery, action/adventure, and romance.Do continue soon.

i love it it has real situations in it and is believable. love it and awaiting more

i like it a lot. it has a good plot sequence and is really detailed and i can imagine it very clearly

really god so far. i could say that you should edit it a little more before you post the next chapters

Hope your Try outs go ok and an't wait for more!!!

Very supicous!! i like i like, I hope Draco can be proven innocent though, this is very good!

Ha i get it now! it was alittle confusing atfirst, but i got it, this is really good, i love it alot, it's a great story, and i love the poem you named it after! 'Nothing Gold Can Stay' is the best poem ever, but i don't get what it has to do with the story......i might find out later on!!
Keep it up!

Very supicous!! i like i like, I hope Draco can be proven innocent though, this is very good!

Dude! I thought Sharlene (Mynuet) was the queen of cliffhangers! Augh! Nice chapter!

Cant wait for part two! Keep up the good work!

^^ Duuuuuuuuuude. Nice plot parallels there. I love twisting stories of mine together as well ^^

HAHA, I wouldn't believe the hickey was a rash either. Hehehehe...UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!

interesting story. one thing though: WHEN are we going to find out how Ginny feels about Draco? other than that, SUPERB job. fascinatinf plot too.
~moi et toi ensemble