good story Harry been made headboy and Hermione headgirl and Harry get privtie lessons from Dumbeldor keep up the good work and update soon

While the chapters are short I like the story. I think that your summary could be changed or that you should include some more about the Knights of time. Good story otherwise though. Keep up the good work and please hurry with the next one.

that was still a short chapter

THe dialogue is top notch. It's brilliant When Harry came out of the bank - I was already intrigued and a little tried, and wanted somethign else of interest to happen, but I didn't know it myself till I read your twist in the end Reader grabbing material on this chapter

I love the brand of humour that you have in your stories, it's quite different to the ones on other fics. The ideas seem fresh and more vibrant. There are many points along wich that gave me a chuckle. But I think you're digging yourself into a whole. See the way that people judge good stories is usually not the average rating - it's how many chapters you have, and how many reviews you got. When your fic has 9 chapters, and only 16 reviews, people get the wrong idea. And you don't have that name reconition where people know that you're a big Portkey Author. So while they are reading the story - they aren't reviewing. Also the chapters are short - so it makes it a little difficult to hold the attention . I would suggest you to combinea few chapters to make them bigger - but then you might loose reviews. So that is a problem. And Ultimately it might result in no change in the reviews numbers.

Aside from that the ending of the chapters, and where they begin again, is a little hard to follow, and I get the feeling, you intented it that way. It's non standard form of story telling, but it's quite wonderful to read

I hope you keep posting... and yes I know - I havea few more chapters still to go

good job! weird bringing in muggle ATM's but it works!

Great chapter, I loved the idea about the robes and the atm. The golem grenade was brilliant as well, an outstanding story, I can't wait to see what you have next. Your deviousness for tactics make this a most enjoyable read.

Yay I love good stories like these

really good

Great chapter, it's nice to get the fog of battle cleared up a bit. I'm very curious to see what the goblins are about, thank you for a good read.

this is really good

Now THAT was a good set of chapters!

I've often wondered why Hogsmeade hadn't been developed in canon. Seems to me like it would be a logical development of the war and an extension of medievial history -- towns being better developed and settled near strongpoints. Nice to see it done here.

Harry handled himself well in the fight, too. I trust he'll be able to do more and more without falling over on his nose as he practices, yes? Nice touch using the Chamber of Secrets as a prison, too, since not that many know where it is and only two that I am aware of can open it. I can see you've put some thought into this, and that's nice to see. An excellent job here!

Oh that was just outstanding, the fight was well written and I loved the ingenuity of portkeying them into the chamber of secrets to hold them. Having people seek shelter at the vaults in Gringotts was pretty clever too. Well done, great story so far, thank you.

Great chapter, interesting bit about the bank and the will, can't wait to see more.