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wow, that certainly took some getting through. more than once during that entire reading i was going "why, ginny? WHY?!" (only not out loud, cuz my family would think i'm psycho... yeah) i felt really bad for ginny (not for draco, though, because half of that he did to himself and he completely deserved it). i'm a sucker for happy endings (as long as they're not completely corny). i love how this ended (and in my minid little ron is going "ewww, they kissed! YUCK!" lol) |
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This is such a beautiful story. I must have read it about 20 times now, but I still come back occasionally to read it. I think you captured the bitterness and resentment of their relationship, and yet showed the underlying spark of hope that they could have true love. This is my favoirte ship and you couldn't have done a better job building a story around it. |
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ashleycSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/07/04
oh how beautiful. i'm glad you had them end up together in the end, i am a sucker for happy endings. give me all the angst and emotion you wish during the body of the story, but deny me a happy ending and i turn murderous. lol, i'm one of those perpetually and irritatingly hopeful people, even when i'm feeling depressed and well, hopeless, i can't help it, it gets on my nerves too, lol. anyway,great great fic. very well written and better in character than any of the other d/g fics i have read. can't wait to read more from you! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/02/04
sooooooooooo good, confuss=ing but good |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/02/04
oh i loved it =D at first i found it very confusing with the flashacks, but im glad you did that now. =) i cant wait to read more of your stories |
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I love it! The way you fragmented the story was perfect for tension building, and I could feel myself trying to piece it all together. I love the fact that it reads like a memory - all jumbled up. Plot wise it is amazing, with the writing skill as eloquent as usual. You have a real way of capturing moments beautifully.
Thank you so much for writing it!
Holly x |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/02/04
A bit confusing at times, but all in all good! |
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AllisterUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/02/04
that was just...beautiful. the whole exchange after the scene with Guillome made my stomach hurt...but in a good way. thanks for writing such a great fic. --ali |
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michouSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/04
 happy ending-yay. |
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EkaterinaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/04
Excellent! Well-formed plot, very twisted and surprising! The flashbacks were slightly confusing, but I figured them out. I love the quotes that you used too and the D/G interaction was great as well as characterization. EEP! I love all of your stories! *fan-girls J* |
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