AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/01/05
thats so cute.  i really liked it, im gonna go read your other stories! |
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MrBenUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/04
Yet another who got here through the FA niffle (fa-niff-el). It's one of those fics that captures the moment and makes you think, "Damn, I wish my life was like that." |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/07/04
Yet another who got here through the FA niffle (fa-niff-el). It's one of those fics that captures the moment and makes you think, "Damn, I wish my life was like that." |
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ViridisUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/04
Dear J,
I'm happy to let you know thatyour story has been Niffled as an excellent read in the FicNifflers Forum in Fiction Alley Park. You'll find my revie at the address:
http://www.fictionalley.org/fictionalleypark/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=62232
Congratulation on your story and keep going!
Viridis |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/04
good chapter blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/04
I very much enjoyed your direct and conversational approach to the story. Your characeters are realistic and intersting, not to mention quite ammusing as they interact.
m. |
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Many people say that the key to a good story is saying what you want to say in the simplest way possible. You've definitely achieved that.
The story is short and simple, yet there is an intricacy beneath the surface.
You've portrayed Draco very nicely and Ginny's simultaneously strong and compassionate-- just how I love to see her.
I really liked the scene in which Ron and Ginny embrace. It reveals a lot about the characters.
The plot is delightfully original. I love the concept of gambling your life like that, and living in the moment.
And, you've included Pansy! A lovely bonus.
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torynSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/05/04
I really enjoyed this little fic (probably cos there were no offspring - offspring annoy me a tad). I also liked that she'd asked others the 'Yes or No' thing previously, and that Malfoy wasn't her one and only confidante. It's always a good thing to see someone who can weave little facts irrelevant to the main plot into a story - Draco thought of as gay, the Muggles Act thing. You really build up the setting and characters well that way. Good onya!  |
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Hey!
Now, this was my very first time of reading a D/G fic, as I stick to my favourite Ship, H/Hr.
But Ri gave me a link to this, and I have to say it was Very good. *Claps*
I really did enjoy it.
Thanks.
~Just Breathing... the Bec half. |
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 Harry and Ginny?!?! Are you mad?!?!
 Ah, Harry and Hermione, sweet love, sweet love.
 Overall, it was okay |
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there were plenty of things in this that i would not have expected at all. you know how to keep a person in suspense and wanting more and everything else like that. ron as a chef, well, someone had to pick up mom's cooking skills, i guess  . this actually seems pretty realistic (sides the whole wizarding world thing, obviously  ) i could see this happening between the characters and everything, awesome story, great job. and draco, actually giving a compliment. in a way i can see it. i almost can not, but there is a significant time difference in this. everyone is the same, yet have some subtle changes. love the story, keep up the great work. |
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Beautifully crafted, with an original plot - which is actually very hard to find! I like the way their roles are almost reversed from your typical D/G story. Your characterisation of Ginny, for example, has her as strong and vulnerable, which is a great change for the reader.
I really enjoyed reading this. Happy endings are ALWAYS a good thing! This has definatly brightened up my day.
Holly x |
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AnnibugSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/04
Lovely. Lots of dialogue, which I love. The yes or no concept was original and I liked the ending. Well done over all. |
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ok so confused, umm yea maybe i'm tired, but i was confused |
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