that waz kinda weird...but kool at the same time...my name iz jasmine, so thats a coincidence!!!

A very short drabble, but powerful nonetheless. It conjures up images that can you at ease. Very nice.

Jennifer

Hmm, I'd forgotten how jasmine smells. It's gotta be good if it inspired you to write this ficlet. My only complaint is it's SOOOOO short!!

Well, this is another capture of Harry's life.

I'm looking for that 3rd fic you dedicated to ICKLE. I lost my YM archives. Let's see - I've read Paper Lilies, Within the Limit ... what's the 3rd one? (I've just clicked on these 2 stories, so that's one hit from each fic that didn't come with a review.)

Wow! Very short, but very powerful.

This is possibly the best thing I've read from you; it's beautiful. As Nielle says, the imagery is great - I really like the repetition of "like jasmine" - it drives the imagery home nicely. You read it and you see Hermione clearly through Harry's eyes. No imagination needed - it's all there on the paper. Er, screen, even. I love "Always tracing and leaving footprints in her wake. Always leaving behind a part, a piece, a trace of herself. Always herself."

A beautiful little piece that surely deserves praise. Well done Nitya! And I hope to see "Sinful" out *very* soon, young lady....

Scrivenshaft

that was nice and simple. very sweet! the images you conveyed were beautiful!

Mmmm... Jasmine. I'm loving the imagery here, Nitya.

It's one of the sweetest shot stories I've ever read!

And here I am again on my quest to read and review every story that I'd shoved off to the side. *clears throat* Anyway, while the story was a bit shorter than what I usually read (which is fine with me, I don't always have time to read an epic novel ), the writing style and prose was definately top notch. Congrats on another brilliantly written piece Nitya. Most of the stories I've read (mine included) usually have Hermione smelling like roses and/or vanilla. Dunno how this came to be, but good for you for not following the trend, so to speak. Right then, I'm off...see you at your next story!

Christine

I liked that.

That was wonderful! This version was pretty descriptive itself, even though you said that your first version was. Short, yes, but still lovely

great one shot... let me know when you have another story up and running...

candice

i like it but it kinda left me feeling incomplete. Is there a sequel or companion piece?

Awwwww! How sweet! It's a very godd way of describing a person, with a metaphor... sorry... English teacher coming through there...

^_^ Very well done!

Epona