BLOODY BRILLIANT!! You need to take over the writing of the next books - I was enchanted. Can't wait to share with friends - and I am not just another teenybopper - 21 yrs. here - but still a huge Potter fan!

Another great story, glad to see some of the background come forth from Patronus Off to read Always!

please dont report me im just trying to get to the new story page and this is the only way i know how anyway i like you story alot well till next time hellow2

Not bad. Cute idea with the "eternity" thing. Bit of a cheesy line, of course, but it wouldn't be a FF without one. But I DID like the story. And that is rare. So congrats. Ta.

a little sappy for my tastes, and the "i love you"s come a little to easy... but over all its nice.

Hi! Wow, I read your story and the part with the whole "I love you", "I love you more" and Hermione said with tears just made me cry! It was so sweet! Not to mention the whole, "But, Harry thought with a rush of joy, he was not alone. Hermione was still with him, deep in his heart, and always would be. He would never be alone again." was so tempting for me to continue to read.
Too bad only chapter 1 is the only chapter that's up!!! Come on'! I really wanna know what's gonna happen later!

Fab job on the story by the way!

This story was really very good. Well done, and I look foward to more of them.

Although a bit unbeleivably fairy tailish its exactly what a harry potter needed...a bit of love in a world of dark

I loved this story. I believe the actual character reactions are very accurate. The story made me feel very happy... Amazing job

erghh.. really nice n sweet story if u ask me.. i melt the first time i read it!!

wonderfully written! so full of emotion and everything! I absolutely love it!!
makes me want to weep in joy

i loved the story. u really should keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! out of 10, 10 being the highest i give u a 7

That has to be one of the sweetest stories ever! I love it!

u screwed up. i think you ment this story akes place in 5th year, not 4th. go 2 hell.

It too short i hate it