Bloody freaking hell. I couldn't even read that "Will you marry me line" without gagging! The thing that really infuriates me is that there really are women out there who would stoop to something like this to trap themselves a man. I've hated Ginny in your other stories, I despise her now! Thank goodness this is a story that's already finished, and I know you'd never let things end like this. (Shuddering and dry heaving as I move on to the next chapter).

that was excellent! just a few pointers. i noticed a few spelling mistakes and also 1 canon mistake. u said that hermione would turn 18 in september but she should already be 18 because shes nearly a year older than harry. except for that tiny error, it was brilliant!
mg2090

that was excellent! just a few pointers. i noticed a few spelling mistakes and also 1 canon mistake. u said that hermione would turn 18 in september but she should already be 18 because shes nearly a year older than harry. except for that tiny error, it was brilliant!
mg2090

you know i absolutely hate you for that? i mean, i admit that it is crucial to the plot and i saw it coming since ginny got pregnant. BUT, it is kinda sad to know that theres ten chapters left till it gets better. anyway reading the next chapter now.
excellent writing and keep up the good work!
mg2090

This is one of those stories where you pretty much know where things are going to go from the outset. Not a criticismby any means; just the nature of the plot. Having said that, you made it an enjoyable and believable trips. Very nicely written. Thanks!

God, Amynoelle, you've done it again! made me scream and curse throughout this whole thing. I wuld even talk to myself like, "thank god draco realized that." or "OMg! Yes! go luna!" lol. i loved it. i really did! ill read the sequel! muuch muuch loovee

I've read the book, I've seen the movie, and now I'm reading a piece of fanfiction based off of it. I can't wait to see what the rest of the story has in hold (once I get to reading it).

I believe two men by the name of Ben and Jerry have appeared in your previous fan fics, and I must say-they are quite brilliant- especially when they come in Mint Chocolate Cookie..... ;-)

Sincerely,
a fellow B&J

gr8 stuff upto now continue ur good work perhaps u shud takeover from JK

that was great stuff to read carry on ur great work hope 2 read more of ur works

Me again..and I just want to get this out:
“What?” Harry asked, concerned.

“No,” Ron said, in awe. “When you say it like that, I’d marry you.”

Definately the best line ever created on earth. I laughed so hard. And I actually read Sweet Home London before this one---which I now wish I hadnt but..i think I might just read it again. But then again that one will just make me even more sad because now I see what they had and its so upsetting how they broke up..even if they do get back together. Those two have had so many bad things happen. The good thing is that they always end up together in the end. Great stories and this time I really am done.

Me again, let me just say that the title of this chapter is brilliant and I'm going to listen to the song while I read it because its just wonderful. The lyrics match so well!

and I'm done.

”What?” Ron said warily.

“Look after her,” Harry said. “Be her friend.”

Yeah that one made me cry for some reason. Okay I really need to stop reviewing and just get back to reading and crying.

AHHHHHHHHHHHH im gonna cry...
they love eachother so much. how can ginny do that to them?! grrr id beat her up.

Neither of them had any way of knowing that this would be the last happy night either of them would have for quite some time.

ahhh I'm already getting sad and teary eyed and i dont even know whats going to happen. I just dont want anything to happen that would ruin their happiness, they deserve to be happy..aww gonna cry i can feel it.