ayumi-nbSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/10/09
Oh, that was so sad, I swear it almost made me cry! And with a happy ending.
Really, if it weren't 'cause I don't like to cry, I would be right now.
Nice job! |
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AshUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/04/07
Ive said it once, and Ill say it again I love your stories, as they are realistic, and even I can relate to this story. You have a way of making people cry and laugh at the same time and that is an excellent gift to have.  I consider you one of my favourite authors |
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CathyDSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/06/06
Oh that was beautiful. Lovely story, really. I absolutely adore the ending, it left me with a big silly grin on my face. Nice work. Thank you, for such a lovely story. ~Cat |
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This was very good, and the Hermione POV was really well done. And then a nice fluffy resolution. Good stuff. |
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That was awesome! It was wonderful and I loved it! I especially loved the last two paragraphs where it's really realistic unlike other fanfics where everything afterwards is just dandy. I did find a mistake though. In the fifth paragraph, it says that she was sixteen. However, in the rest of the story, it says she was seventeen. Just a small little error. Oh, and I also loved how Hermion had a tantrum. Everyone has tantrums every now and then, you know? Even Hermione. It was really well written. Good job! |
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q.thewsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/10/05
Oh yes, this is one of the very few way that could happen.
Having said that, obviuosly i liked the story!
Bye |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/05
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Aww...  That was very good. I liked it a lot. Now I think I'll go and read some more of your fics. |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/10/04
What a wonderful story. Your description of how down Hermione felt rang so true. I hope to read more from you... |
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CopperSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/10/04
I love the simplicity of this... the idea of Harry being teased for his feelings and keeping the other boys away and how that could lead to Hermione's feeling unattractive. I like the humanity of her insecurity about her looks even as she knows they aren't the most important thing.
And above all, I love the 'Truly Happily Ever After'. |
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slyphiadSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/09/04
yeah...like your story!! it's kinda cute. keep up the good work!! |
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I love this one, too... really great stuff... please continue with more of these one shots... |
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Lovely, Apolla. Just read your piece at hphg_ficathon and realized I hadn't read anything else of yours so I directed myself here.
This is very good. This is Hermione very in character - how I think she would feel, especially if she got to seventh year with only the Yule Ball date.
And Harry hiding it so poorly from everyone EXCEPT Hermione is just perfect.
Great job! |
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Awww...that was the sweetest thing I've ever read!It wa so cute! |
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its awesome to know that some hot person out there really could love us, despite our twisted faults and thoughts |
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