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Awesome story but I felt the ending was a little on the weak side . Seemed a little forced, like you were tired of writing and just banged something out to finish it off . Maybe you had it planned or not, just didn't flow well with the rest of the story . It was a good story though and I'm glad you made Draco a villian again, can't stand any Draco/Ginne ships . They fit together like steak and choclate fudge ice cream topping . In other words, that ship is an abomination . |
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Radical7Signed | Chapter : 25 | Date : 11/01/10
Brilliant work. I love reading HP fanfic and this is really one of the best! I've fallen in love with Merc, and Damien is a very good character and unique plot idea.
The amount of time and effort you must have put into this is truly astounding. Thanks for giving me a chance to read this story. I don't think I'll ever forget the story or it's characters. |
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Radical7Signed | Chapter : 25 | Date : 11/01/10
Brilliant work. I love reading HP fanfic and this is really one of the best! I've fallen in love with Merc, and Damien is a very good character and unique plot idea.
The amount of time and effort you must have put into this is truly astounding. Thanks for giving me a chance to read this story. I don't think I'll ever forget the story or it's characters. |
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Radical7Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 06/01/10
I have to say, I absolutely LOVE your sense of humor and style!!! |
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Radical7Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 04/01/10
I've read The Power He Knows Not and have read the first 3 chapters of this one. I have to say you story is very good and I'm hooked. I have one complaint though. A lot of the time I feel like you're using big words to impress the reader and sometimes your use words incorrectly. (eg. She is absolutely 'mortified' by the dream) I'm sure you mean terrified but mortified mean embarassed. Besides that I like your story so far. |
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TiredEyesSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 18/10/09
This story has been posted for awhile so my review won't matter much..but i'd however like to point out how utterly stupid is to complain for a cliffhanger. If you don't like it, wait till the story's over to read it for God's sake! VLeigh, I really hope you didn't change a thing in spite of some ridicolous reviewer, cuz I absolutely love how you write! A cliffhanger is as much part of the story as your sense of humor (which I love, really), and I'd hate for it to change. Thanks for all the hard work! |
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Raven3182Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/09/09
A little constructive criticism, please don't take this the wrong way, I'm not trying to put you down. I think you're a little out of character here. As an example, I don't think Harry would even know what the word 'epistle' means let alone use it in a sentence. I also don't think the letter writing style really worked. Be that as it may, I really liked "Power" so I'm gonna keep reading this. Thanks for writing! |
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awesome story you really captured the characters.
Thank you so much  |
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Oh. My. God.
You win.
I would have much preferred that this happened instead of what actually did in 6 and 7!
All time favorite HP fanfiction right here.
Amazing. |
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I\'ve only just come across this series and I must say that I absolutely love it! I was going to wait until the end to leave a review, but....
The other day, I was desperately searching on here for a story that I read a long time ago that was one of my all time favorite fanfics (btw, this one here is jumping up on my list!), but I couldn\'t remember the author or the title...So, I clicked author list, selected V at random and clicked on your story at random......
Bewitched, Bothered, and Bewildered was that story I was looking for. I read your A/N and was like O.O THANK YOU! hahaha |
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I don't like made up characters unless they have a lot of backround... and merc?
I'm not protesting the hero here...but I am just not that into the story here anymore. The empath thing was cool. I do feel as if I have let myself down. so sorry about all this.
I do love your writing style and I should think you would make a great novelist yet.
never stop writing.
see ya
LL
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is there anything developing between ginny and draco now that he's not the 'public enemy?'
I'm up late...reading romance....sipping wine and eating cough drops.
I'm pathetic.
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gods...so much bloody drama. fitiing though....don't you think? well of course YOU think so, you wrote the bloody thing. Anyways, I love how the story has it's evil little unexpected but not unwanted twists and turns. I'll keep reading because it's the only thing I know how to do.
A little self-centered aren't I?
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I should think that by now I would've stopped reading. I do so quite a lot lately when something doesn't strike my fancy. But this story... I don't know...has something more to it. I would hope that you finished it well? with a good ending?
pah, I'm english and have too much pride for anyone to handle. I love the story and hope I read the rest.
LL
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I appreciate the use of the shock value syndrome. But I do hope harry doesn't defeat voldemorte with...'love'. that would be cynically silly to an uncynical person such as I.
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