TiredEyesSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 18/10/09
This story has been posted for awhile so my review won't matter much..but i'd however like to point out how utterly stupid is to complain for a cliffhanger. If you don't like it, wait till the story's over to read it for God's sake! VLeigh, I really hope you didn't change a thing in spite of some ridicolous reviewer, cuz I absolutely love how you write! A cliffhanger is as much part of the story as your sense of humor (which I love, really), and I'd hate for it to change. Thanks for all the hard work! |
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Raven3182Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/09/09
A little constructive criticism, please don't take this the wrong way, I'm not trying to put you down. I think you're a little out of character here. As an example, I don't think Harry would even know what the word 'epistle' means let alone use it in a sentence. I also don't think the letter writing style really worked. Be that as it may, I really liked "Power" so I'm gonna keep reading this. Thanks for writing! |
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awesome story you really captured the characters.
Thank you so much  |
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Oh. My. God.
You win.
I would have much preferred that this happened instead of what actually did in 6 and 7!
All time favorite HP fanfiction right here.
Amazing. |
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I\'ve only just come across this series and I must say that I absolutely love it! I was going to wait until the end to leave a review, but....
The other day, I was desperately searching on here for a story that I read a long time ago that was one of my all time favorite fanfics (btw, this one here is jumping up on my list!), but I couldn\'t remember the author or the title...So, I clicked author list, selected V at random and clicked on your story at random......
Bewitched, Bothered, and Bewildered was that story I was looking for. I read your A/N and was like O.O THANK YOU! hahaha |
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I don't like made up characters unless they have a lot of backround... and merc?
I'm not protesting the hero here...but I am just not that into the story here anymore. The empath thing was cool. I do feel as if I have let myself down. so sorry about all this.
I do love your writing style and I should think you would make a great novelist yet.
never stop writing.
see ya
LL
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is there anything developing between ginny and draco now that he's not the 'public enemy?'
I'm up late...reading romance....sipping wine and eating cough drops.
I'm pathetic.
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gods...so much bloody drama. fitiing though....don't you think? well of course YOU think so, you wrote the bloody thing. Anyways, I love how the story has it's evil little unexpected but not unwanted twists and turns. I'll keep reading because it's the only thing I know how to do.
A little self-centered aren't I?
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I should think that by now I would've stopped reading. I do so quite a lot lately when something doesn't strike my fancy. But this story... I don't know...has something more to it. I would hope that you finished it well? with a good ending?
pah, I'm english and have too much pride for anyone to handle. I love the story and hope I read the rest.
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I appreciate the use of the shock value syndrome. But I do hope harry doesn't defeat voldemorte with...'love'. that would be cynically silly to an uncynical person such as I.
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whoa! I have no idea what just happened, but I now fully immersed back into this wonderful tale. I hope that this kind of dramatic twisting will insue in the future chapters as well.
good day
LL
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ok, NOW this is interesting. I think I just might read the whole thing. I commend you on your cliffhanging efforts to keep me with the insight to want to keep reading this fabulous written epic of a story.
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I'm torn about this. reading the rest or not... I want to to see if something is going to happen.
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I don't know if I'm going to be reading much more of this story if it doesn't soon develop a clear plot line. and even then... I'm very impatient...
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an okay start... I like the way you write. its got a style that keeps me interested on its own.
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