DragenSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 29/04/08
Great end to the story mate, I like how you done it and I hope that you'll keep doing this kind of work again. |
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DragenSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 29/04/08
Another great chapter mate, I love how the story is going, I love the wake up call that Harry got. |
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DragenSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/04/08
Great start mate, I like how Hermione had to take Harry place to be sold as a slave and that Harry got her.
I like what Harry got Hermione to do.  |
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Malu D.Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 05/02/08
WOW, the this fic was SO GOOD! WOW, i LOVED all the couples and the things they did, specially H&H, VERY good done! |
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alruneSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 24/12/07
hooray i finally found this story again... i was searching for this on a couple of different sites because i didn't think it would be on portkey... but anywho, hooray! i found it again. lol. i love this story... the sex scenes are hot and i totally loved the idea... keep up the great work!! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 10/01/07
This is soooooo funny! Loved it, i was laughing at the end when Luna was talking to Ron. Typical Luna |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 24/11/06
I think that this is one of the best stories that I have read on this site so far. (no offense to the other authors) |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 30/05/06
i love Luna's boldness. very funny 
These are my favourite pairings, great story. First chapters were a little shaky on the idea but the last chapters were good
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 30/05/06
its really good but hermione sounds kinda low. it would have been better if they were both discovering love and lust at the same time |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/06
it would have been better if both of them were virgins, not only hermione. makes it sweeter |
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what? no sequel? DANG! as much as I'm a total draco and ginny fan, (then lily and james, THEN harry and hermione), I think that the ron and luna parts were my favorite! the harry and hermione parts were an achievement themselves, just for them to get out the "i love you's" and all. draco and ginny, well, i'm just glad that they didn't kill each other, lol (which reminds me, i think we're ALL pretty glad that harry and hermione didn't get caught... or DO they, eventually? rotfl, j/k)... but ron and luna just took the cake! i mean, luna was so inocent that she was embarassed about "exploring" and whatnot, but she's so used to being open that she didn't realize that "telling ron she liked their relationship" was not something that was usually told in the open (lol, i loved that! luna could easily be my favorite character, thanks to you!). i loved reading this SOOO much! (no clue if i reviewed this already, but either way, here it is) |
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Hahaha it was so funny thinking of Harry doing a strip tease overall a very good story can't wait to read some more of ur writing |
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ahhh!!!  that was going really well!!!  you should have continued more!!! the ending wasnt very satisfying!!!  please right more |
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yay I liked it alot...but this is coming from the queen of all smutt Monkies...lol so thank you for brightening my day...CHESSY GRIN! lol hope to read others from you in the future...
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WOW that was so Hot.Love that Hermione got auctioned off and not Harry,this is great.
~Rach |
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