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This is truly INGENIOUS! Its so original and EXACTLY what i wish would have happened in PoA! Unfortunately, it didnt...but this, THIS was wonderful! It explained everything that happened and it wasn't legnthy and boring. It was original and clever and you used the actualy text from PoA to turn the story around ("search the skies") very creative! Great Job! |
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MuirninSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/01/04
Rather delightful twist on a canon event... I like the turn of events here... good work! |
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EuroSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/01/04
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gal-texterUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/01/04
Oh, good, this one's here. Here's a Recommendation I posted long ago, when I read saw fic on FFN. This thread was updated a few hours ago:
http://talk.portkey.org/index.php?showtopic=1329 |
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Very very sweet story, and a really good rewrite of PoA.
I can imagine how harry must feel like the yoke of an eeg with hermione 
3 thumbs up!.
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KypDurronSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/01/04
Wooohooo! I like this version better! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/01/04
If only J.K. Rowlings incorporated WAFF instead of Angst. |
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That was so sweet! I loved it!
Your writing is fantastic and flawless, the plot made complete sence (which is rare for these time travel fics), and it was very believable.
Great! |
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lordanhurSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/01/04
that was soo nice. i loved it. it was sweet and fluffy and made me smille. |
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FionaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/01/04
This was good, if very AU. I don't think there are any holes in the plot of POA or any of the books. Remember, the series hasn't been completed yet. There are still two books to be received and JKR - being the obsessive, meticulous author that she is - would rather take 10 years to put a book out than not have something work out in the end.
But I liked your writing style. Keep up the good work. |
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kayceUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/01/04
 
I am sitting here with the widest grin on my face. I can not tell you how incredibly awesome that was. I am (starting every sentence with 'I') completely stunned, amazed, astonished, and nearly stricken speechless. Wow, holy hell, wow. Okay, now I'm laughing because of the incredible nature of this fantastic piece of literary work. I'm going to have to go sit in a corner to gather myself. Freakin' unreal...just...wow
kc |
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JessieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/01/04
Nice |
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KyraUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/01/04
You just deserve another ten period! |
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KryaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/01/04
That was beautiful. Great job! |
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Beautiful work, you sure have a way with words.
Please keep it up.
Eagerly waiting for more |
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