Enjoyed this small view of Harry's future far more than the books 5-7 especially that crap epilogue. Would have much rather seen something like this. Bravo. Very well told.

Oy! Your author's note sounds apologetic. There's nothing to be apologetic about with a oneshot like this!

oh yeah i can understand. some of the stuff the people do in rowling's story makes me go are they wizards or not and isn't hermione really the cleverest witch and is harry not the chosen one?

um um um snickers laughs snickers laughs toodles all you good writers bye bye wuv ya

Very good! Love it! I so agree that they are the perfect couple!

Ehe... I almost forgot... I love the part where Harry says: "'Can I help it,' he pleaded, 'if I'm married to the sexiest witch in Britain?'"

and then where...

"Hermione's cheeks colored slightly as she turned to re-enter the house. But no sooner had her hand touched the door handle than Harry pointed his wand and said, 'Accio sexy witch!'"

*starry eyed right there*

"With a squeal of surprise, Hermione flew backwards and landed in Harry's lap.

"'Harry!' she scolded playfully. 'The neighbors!'"

and Harry finally says:

"'Let 'em get their own sexy witch,' he said huskily. 'You're mine!'"


That was beautiful! I was laughing so hard!

Again, great job!

~*Eli

ADORABLE!!! *sighs* If only this would have acctually happened in the books... *sniffles* Oh wells... we still can dream, can't we?

Nice job! Very sweet!

Lotsa luv,

~*Eli

this rocks HARD! I love it. It's really cute, and especially how much they love each other. lol.

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I LOVE~~~!!!

Great rewrite of the third and fourth book!

*starry eyed* I LOVE HARRY AND HERMIONE!!!!

And, I LOVE your story!

~*Eli

awwww I love it to bad it didn't happen in the book

HOLES???? In PoA? What holes? I LOVE PoA! Great story anyway, though. Just lovely. There are NO HOLES in PoA!!

Tbia is a great story, with a interesting twist on the prisoner of azkaban story. Tbank you for bringing it to us in a thoughtful and useful way, and not as pure fluff. Keep up the good work, and keep on writing the great stories. Haven't read the other parts of this story, but about to when i get done with this review. 10 out of 10

This was a wonderful story, I liked the alternate spin on PoA and therefore GoF! Keep up the wonderful writing!

it was very good i enjoyed it i agree that they are the obvious counterparts of James and Lilly

You have written a great story here. It's very romantic... but I think the changes you made were a little too drastic. But a great story!