Although I don't review as often as I should and usually don't bother with the number rating when I do(it's the lazy way out, if you are going to review something you should write something...not just assign a number to it)I'm making an exception for this story for two reasons:

1. It's well written and thought out. I've enjoyed it so far and can't wait to see how you reveal the identities of Evil Harry and Raptor to the Wizarding World.

2. It bothers me that your story has received low ratings simply because people think the story contains a "mean Harry" or one they don't like. It's quite clear where this story is going with Raptor's identity (Tom Marvolo Riddle ring a bell?) and for your story to be dismissed because the reader has no patience or foresight is silly.

Actually there is a third reason I ranked it.

3. It deserves a 10! Keep up the good work. Hoping for an update soon.

I cant wait to read the rest!

I'm not going to rate this story until i find out if this Harry you have developed is what we see or there is a deeper plot to his actions, like one of the other reviewers said about Harry being very much UN-Harry, i must admit i have the same feelings about this story.

I cannot imagine Harry doing such things and behaving like he is, it is just not right.

I hope there IS a deeper plotline we dont know about yet, and pairing H/Hr in this story is going to be a bitch, unless Hermione herself becomes evil, and from what you have written so far she at least seems somewhat in character.

I will be following it step by step, but im not going to rate it from now on.

i really like this story. trey hiam raptor is a nice name.

Why Harry! Why!

Raptor has got to be the real Harry... that is all I have to say.

Ok, I want to give this story a higher rating. I really do, because it's very well written. But I simply cannot wrap my mind around the Harry that you've written. For Harry to turn evil would be for the sky to turn red, for the grass to turn blue, for the Earth to switch places with the sun. It's just unfathomable, and that takes away from my enjoyment of the story. I'm sorry. I like your writing style.. I really do. But since the story was accepted on Portkey and all, I'll keep reading. I'm sure you have a twist up your sleeve somewhere, so I'll keep reading. Keep up the good work.

OMG.. that is so good. I am like in awe about how it is coming along. That letter in the story was so powerful. I cannot think of better first chapter in all of the stories I read.. I cannot wait to read the next chapter.. good luck on writing more..

The changing of point of views were a bit confusing but overall the story was good.

I would really like to read a conversation between Raptor and Hermione about Harry. See want interesting memories she talks about with him. I would also like to see a conversation with the "fake" Harry and Hermione in which Harry says something that Hermione knows is not true. I did like how he called Ron Ronald and Ginny Virginia. Subtle Very Subtle, but I like it.

thanks

I liked this fic in the beginning. I thought the first chapter showed great promise and was really interesting. But there are so many multiple POV's in the second and especially the third chapters, that I'm having a hard time keeping straight who is talking or thinking and I'm losing the focus. You would be well-served to at least indicate when you are switching perspectives, because it is too difficult for your readers to folllow otherwise.

Can't wait for more....

Great job with this! I love it, but it is a little bit hard to follow on my PC. But thats just cuz it dosen't show up right!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!

-Kat

"Like the day I lost what was left of my family, and all of my friends. But I’ve recovered, and I’ve shown the heartless bastard who took them from me that I play for keeps. He's stripped me of everything I’d had except my life twice now, and I’d be damned if I’d give him a chance for a third time.

Potter…

The name swirls in my mind, never completely leaving it. It’s funny the comfort I used to take from that name. Back when…"

I don't know about you but I think Raptor may as well be Harry - all of what Raptor said could as well be said by Harry about Voldermort.

Continue!