very very good have harry explain why he changed and what happend to voldemort

Please don't make me wait for a long time. I'm not very patient and you can tell!!!

Please update soon!!! soo suspenseful!! write quickly am i going to be able to wait???

THis is great keep up the good work!! I love it

THis is great keep up the good work!! I love it

i dont see why people are rating it so low. big deal if harry killed some people. its well written and all that junk. so keep writin

Play around with the words you got frm the latin translator. Make the words flow smoothly with less harsh sound endings. So far the story is really good update quick please ps I think I know who Raptor is. Nice Disgise. sry about speeling Keep on writin. bye

Fascinating, Harry killed, but with good justification, unforunatly, the ministry will hunt him down regardless due to their own moral bankruptcy, great start, can't wait to see more.

Well, your story is not bad but please...

You must give us a note on whose POW you're shifting to... I almost failed to grasp this chapter because I couldn't figure out whose thoughts we were following...

oh this is sooo depressing! I am reading this for the sole purpose of reassuring myself that hope lives....Harry is not a bad guy I feel it in my bones-I am really starting to lean toward Raptor as actually being Harry somehow or another...don't have any clue why I think that...other than I'm blindly optimistic and Rapotr is familiar (aside from being a bird name...like phoenix)

Here's hoping!
VLeigh

good chapter and this is definetly a very wicked story. Can't wait uptil you post the next chapter!

Oooh. Harry is one evil bastard in this story. I like it. Always like seeing the characters in different positions than the same ones they are in almost every story. This is getting very interesting. Keep up the good work.

Wow. This was really good. First story I've ever read where Harry has committed a murder and had to run away from his present life. I hope he is able to explain the reasons for his murders and that they won't ship him off to Azkaban for what he did. This is a really interesting topic and you've done a really good job writing the opening chapter for it. Can't wait to finish reading it. Great job!

Trey Hiam Raptor reminds me of the 2nd harry potter book

Loved the chapter!! Can't wait for more!