I love this one! it sooo cute. i realy hope you continue writing.

This a bit different, from the other two i read, but is not desapointing, it's really nice piece. well i hope you still write more, bye

aww. . angst and fluff. perfect. You should consider doing a prequel, this was amazing.

Absolutely loved your story! Thank you!

this is very creative! I liked it alot!

Short ... seemingly simple but with a depth that touches you deeply ... a perfect blending of angst and lust and (again) something more.

A perfect read for an early day ... the cold shower that follows the reading is worth it.



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That was GREAT!

That is got to be one of the best stories I have read. Great Job! Look at me I'm still smiling!

Angsty smut! Yay! Please continue soon!

hbeginning part was a little hurried a little confusing for me. I'm sure it wasn't for most people. Other than that, once they started on their _________ , it made sense, and flowed really wonderfully.

Loved it....

This was great...

That was delightful! I've never read a fic written like that before. Lovely piece, lyrical.. very good! And the naughty parts wowza! Hope you'll be posting more?? *crosses fingers*

Hey I really like this! The details, the scenery, mood, the simplicity of it all. It so...abrupt and short...yet at the same time...so dramatic. Great job!

Touching, and very sweet! Thanks so much for sharing.