Wow. That was fantastic!! I've read a lot of H/Hr fanfics, and this one seemed to be so real. I love that line, "They both knew". Its nice to read a story where there aren't big proclamations of love, but them both just knowing. 10/10!

Very nice take on Harry and Hermione. You have a very descriptive and elegant writing style. Keep up the great work.

Wow. Great story, Lauren! I'm a fan (usually) of the whole "it-takes-them-forever-to-realize-their-love-but-when-they-do-everything-moves-fast" genre, but only for some light-weight reading material. I could never see that actually happening because Harry and Hermione are just too deep for that. But this...I could definitely see this story being canon. Fabulous. Simply fabulous.

That was...was...great! Wonderful! Beautiful! You are such a great writter! And I have to agree. I can see this, or something very similar, happeing in the books. Great fic!

omg! omg omg omg. this was so beautiful. ok u kno wut? i have read many fan fics, but this is like the only one that seems like it could actually happen. dont get me wrong. the other ones were great and sweet 2. but this one. wow.

This fic pretty much defines H/Hr for me, it's beautifully written. I could see this happening if JK didn't lean toward R/Hr...damn her!
Well, anyway...great job!

Wow...This is most certainly some powerful stuff. The dialogue was fantastic, but what was even greater was what was left unspoken. Kudos to you -- I always fancied a H/Hr relationship that just, simply, existed. No need for pretty words all the time, you know?

that was a good story. i liked it. the ending was kool too.

-mandi

Wow! I'm impressed! Really really excellent. Beautiful, deep, hard and true. You've done an wonderful story. It was an intense pleasure reading it! Thank you and keep writing

youre brilliant. absolutely brilliant. I cant even explain it.. Oh my goodness..

you're just too wonderful and awesome for words.'

-tearsofher

oo, i like the answer to why she only fights with ron. it's excellent!! great fic!

I've read this twice already, but it's still good. I had to read it again to refresh my memory so I'll understand the sequel.

Great story.The emotions were really intense which made it more believable. Feels like you're right there watching them argue then kiss. Good job.

cannot say much words beside: IS GREAT

That was soooooooooooooooo great!!!!!!