Parts are still a bit "fan-cliche" about woe is me Ranma, and a little fast paced. But all in all, not too bad.
I'd also fit in some things about how *weird* things happened in the past when Ranma got very emotional. Ie. normal wizarding child antics (like Harry's hair growing back overnigt, Neville bouncing down the road after being dropped out a window, etc.)
Some of the "foot in mouth" syndrome Ranma has here is very forced. Ranma is more unthinking about his remarks. He basically just blurts out a (usually pretty short) stupid phrase, then Akane either hits him or bursts out crying.
It's just a little much, is all.
Keep up the good work.