luv4booksUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 19/10/05
awww, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WITE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON! ans whoa how do you know about those stuff about the L-3 whatever whachtamacallit thingy stuff I like this story and this idea of yours.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON! |
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katieUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 15/10/05
great story, dont stop writing or ABANDON!!! That would be the worst way to end a story |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 18/02/05
It made me want to kill hermione for what she did to everyone |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 19/10/04
that was so goos so far keep on wirting u are awesome !! i mean it!!! |
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IzzieqUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 01/08/04
Okay...let me get this straight...Hermione breaks Harry's heart as he opens his heart to her...lies to his face and tells him she doesn't love him and totally disappears without so much as a word to anyone....she ignores her friends for 12 years...what is wrong with her? Then she expects to come and in and have everyone throw her a welcome home party? Not quite. She didn't seem to have been missing them, especially Harry too much. I don't think she's really shown that much remorse...she just expected to waltz in and everything would be peachy? It almost sounded like she was trying to turn it around on them and make them feeling guilty for their reaction. Harry has eveery right to be downright p***ed. She broke his heart for no apparent reason. I think we need more angst there. I don't think he should have told her that he still loved her....She was selfish and uncaring and inconsiderate to do what she did...I am glad that Malfoy at least put her in her place somewhat. I mean she is just starting to realize what she did? IN 12 years it never occurred to her? I thought she was smart...she has alot of explaining to do....
I really think you should have Harry be more angry with her for longer....she just made too big of a screw up to be taken back like that too quickly. SHe really has to understand the consequences of her actions. She had no right to come barging in expecting to be part of the trio again. |
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J.C. RoseUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 20/07/04
I love your story! Escpecially the arguements between Harry and Hermione along with Hermione and Draco, they are hilarous. What's missing? Are the pieces of paper missing? |
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LeighUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 18/07/04
GAH!!!! What kind of ending is that?! You know how much I hate cliffies!! Argh... once again I'll say you better update SOON!
--Leigh |
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 17/07/04
what's up with the cold war crap? it's like what the hell why do people always make russia the bad guy, sorry the cold war endded, otherwise it's okay, but that really annoys the hell out of me. |
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angelicaUnsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 17/07/04
please update as soon as possible.
i can't wait to see what happens next. |
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This story is amazing! Certainly one of a kind. Please update soon! |
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KypDurronSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 17/07/04
Yes, Malfoy. You tell her! She comes waltzing in after twelve bloody years and expects everything to be exactly the same? Well, tough luck, Granger! |
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ooohh so what happened
what was missing
how did they get in
blah blah blah
hehe loved the Harry hermione stuff |
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hmmmm... this chapter was interesting, if there were thre apparitions, but NOT three Death Eaters... how many death Eaters WERE there?? And WHAT is harry not allowed to tell??
YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON!
Leigh |
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 13/07/04
Wow, will they kill each other now? lol, wouldn't be all too surprised, uh keep it up!! |
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EleannaSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 12/07/04
I really like this story.
The plot is thickening nicely...
The wizarding world has figured out how to go to other planets? That's the impression I got. This could be most interesting. A planet of only wizards. Wouldn't the DA's just love that. No more muggles. Also might be safer if the muggles blow up the earth. Hmmm.
I find your Harry a bit of a jerk, but I guess it goes without saying that once a person becomes a politician....
Eleanna |
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