qthewsUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/06/08
Very nice, one of the best "assembled" songfic i ever read as the song is really part of the story, not only its inspiration and/or soundtrack.
Nice ending too.
Ciao! |
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That's cute! And I love the song. Be careful not to mix up "whose" and "your" (possessives) with "who's" and "you're" (contractions of who is and you are). Nice work! |
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AshUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/06/07
very sweet! Its the sugar on top of my day!
I loved Ron in the end, nice plot twist, who would have known Ron of all people could have more than a teapspoon range of emotion? |
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Oh, this is such a wonderful little fic. At first, I thought I was going to smack Ron for being such an idiot, but now I see he did it because he knew they liked each other. Wonderful. Stupendous. Marvelous! Keep up the good work with your fics! Can't wait to read them!
lil_irish_girl |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/09/06
it was alright but the ending should of ended better but it ok. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/06/06
i've read this fanfic before and i keep rereading it because i think it's that good. i'm a serious H/Hr fan so any fanfics about H/Hr I will defintely read. as for this fanfic, it was awesome and i absolutely love it. in conclusion on a scale of 1 to 10 i give this one a 10! very very good story! |
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DemagogueSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/01/06
Oh my God, that is the most adorable thing ever, and totally perfect to read after a reeeeaaaaalllllyyyy awful few days. Luvin it. |
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That's pretty ironic how Hermione was crying over Ron breaking up with her when he broke up with her because Ron realized that Hermione and Herry should be together.
Keep up the great writing! I look forward to your other stories. |
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I liked this story. It works. In all honesty, I think you're giving Ron a little too much credit, but that's okay. It holds up just fine. I have been consistently impressed by your writing, and when I read your profile, I was not at all surprised that you are working on a novel. I really enjoy your writing, so when you get that published, send me an email, I'd love to take a look at the novel. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/10/05
This is good. It left me with a smile on my face. You might want to go back and proofread, though. There are a few spelling errors. Specifically Your is used when You're should be used more than once. Please keep writing! |
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SpeedzSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/09/05
oops, i forgot to sign in lol. That was me btw underneath, eheh, i thought u might like 2 know....sorry. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/09/05
Good story. I like how u fitted in the song in the story without just having it randomly there. Wonderful work. Well done |
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Angel0501Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/08/05
Cool story! I liked it! Your writing is really good. |
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BananaFiggUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/08/05
Aaawwwwwwww! That's so cute! I almost cried!
Lol! It's very cute though. Keep up the good work!
~BananaFiggyFudge
P.S. I love that song! It sooooo fits Harry & Hermione too! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/04/05
Great story.
loved it.
i really hope to read more of your stories this one was great |
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