Oops! He grabbed the wrong parchment? Not good at all. Oh dear. I know that this hasn't been updated in three years...but a girl can hope. Please finish it! This story has a fun plot and it sounds like it could be good.

Wow, it's been like more than a year since you last updated. I just so happen to have come across this story while I was looking for James/Lily fan fics to read. I like your story though, when are you going to continue?

WOW! OMG can't wait to see what happens with the game so hurry up if you can!

Ok...I love reading story's, but I'm really sad when a good story isn't finished! Please, I have never read a story like this before, and I like how each character has a problem that has to be solved, they're all linked as well, like Sirius and his bludger, James and his leadership problems, Lily and parents...it's a great story!
And you've left us at a cliff hanger! I really wish you'd continue this, it's an amazing story with a new twist on the James and Lily relationship. It's well written and you have a great characterisation. Please write more soon! I can't wait!

making james and sirius look like jerks isn't what i like to hear. but other than that your story is wonderful.

making james and sirius look like jerks isn't what i like to hear. but other than that your story is wonderful.

please please please pleeeeeeeeeease update!!!!!!!
I cant stand waiting. your killing me!

so far so good im lovin the tension between james and lily keep it up and update soon

Oh no! Bad Lily! Grrr, I did NOT see that one coming! Excellent chapter, and I really hope she kicks James's butt. He could use an ego-deflater. But then again, so could she. And besides I love him. But, I love her too!

Aarg! You're not supposed to make love-and-hate your characters at the same time! (Excellent job there, btw - mark of a good writer)

Lots of love,
Bella

P.S. Since I'm having so much trouble choosing sides, UPDATE SOON so this madness can be resolved!

This is motivation for you! WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love, Bella

P.S. Apparently, I need 10 words. So....

I just realized that I never reveiwed...I'm a terrible person! Good 1st chappie, you know i my L/J!

Heehee...and let the games begin! LoveHate!James/Lily is uber-funny, and you do it justice, Jen! BRAVO!

Wow, this story is really cool! I love all the dialogue, it keeps the story moving. Lily and James' characters are very believable. I like how Lily has random thoughts about writing lol, that just seems like something she would do as a reporter.

Oh - that's no good - Lily's boss picked up the wrong article. I wasn't expecting that. But I have a feeling the game between Lily and James will be quite amusing, I'm looking forward to it. I know you're quite busy too, so I won't bother you with any update soon! notes. I'll definitely be back for the update though; I already have the story bookmarked.

Great job - this is really good so far (though I never expected anything less from you, you're just a good writer in general)!

~Emily~

that was sillllyyy Lily! Going up against the Big Bad Potter boy. And Silly Editor! 'Mr. Andover' needs to be told off! aww, my poor Remy, he should have a little love in his life, pwetty please? and Man! don't take to long to update! You've been busy! but every time you spend talking to me! you can spend at least a 1/4 of the time writing! that way! there should be a new chapter in a matter of days!!

I can't wait to see what happens next. You've done such an awesome job so far, and I can't wait for more!