MmeFleissSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/02/07
Thank you for writing a Hermione who's not sexually repressed. She's much too rare in fanfiction.  |
Author Feedback: You're welcome |
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dinz86Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/11/06
I've read this fic before (while I was still lurking around Portley ;D) and I just wanted to comment on how much I liked this fic! I love all your stories Anne U!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much  |
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XavielSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/11/06
Not completely sure I like the idea of a promiscuous Hermione but the writing was good. I would have grown a tad resentful at them for having sex for all that time in the next room from where I could hear it. You should write a sequel where Harry and Hermione break the news to Ron, whom I feel sorry for because turnabout is fair play (Although I don't think Harry would be able to get Hermione back other than by her hearing tons of bragging stories from oogles of other women). |
Author Feedback: I never thought Hermione was promiscuous here. She was in a "friends with benefits" situation with Ron, not a loving relationship, but she wasn't out shagging other guys too. I've never planned to write a sequel, but thanks for the idea and for commenting. |
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SabineSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/12/05
When I first started reading Harry Potter fan fiction, I just couldn't make myself read smut fics about characters I envisioned as children in my mind. Then somewhere I ran upon this story, read it and realized what I'd been missing. I guess what I'm trying to say is that this fic brought to life the adults JKR's characters could grow up to become. And I'm so glad that it happened; it caused these characters to become much more real to me.
And hot smut helped a lot, too.  |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much; that's really quite a compliment. This is one of the most thoughtful reviews I've ever received. I hope you'll read my other stories too and enjoy them as well. |
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It's a good story, nicely written, but since the idea of Ron and Hermione makes me sick, i didn't quite like it. Now i need to get that image out of my head |
Author Feedback: I'm sorry you can't handle the Ron/Hermione angle. The point of the story was that Hermione finally realized she was with the wrong guy and H/Hr got together in the end. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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Not much to say except "I liked it!" and especially "I really liked the ending...both a little funny and rather sweet" ^^ |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. This was the first smut fic I ever posted, so it has a special place in my heart. Thanks again. |
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tashaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/03/05
Excellent story...if there is more i cant wait but if there is more i guess that would be good aswell |
Author Feedback: No, there isn't any more. That's all there is. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing. |
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utkari02Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/01/05
Cute, Anne. I'll admit, I didn't know what to think of it at first. Seems very out of character for Harry, but it ended well. |
Author Feedback: Well, I was aiming for a happy ending, so I guess it did end well. In this story Harry is too emotionally constipated to ask for what he needs, which is Hermione. I figured it would literally take her catching him in the act to shock him out ofall that. But yeah, I can see where you might think it's OOC for Harry. (interestingly no one on PK seems to think it was OOC for Hermione to ditch Ron so quickly Thanks for reviewing. |
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PenelopeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/05
Holy sweet Merlin! This story was great, and I have to admit at first I was hesitant because I didn't want to think of Harry as a voyeur...watching Hermione and Ron...and...well, you know...but then when it switched POVs, and you gave us Hermione's. Well, everything tied together and wrenched my heart for Harry when she found him...but *sigh* they ended up in love, and that's the perfect place for them. |
Author Feedback: Sometimes when I write Harry (like in this fic), he's got some emotional baggage that makes it really difficult for him to go after what he needs. I really felt like I had to write both POVs, and alternate them, to get the story to work. Thank you for reviewing. I'm sorry it took me so long to respond. |
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jchaserSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/10/04
What a great story...really liked the ending. Your descriptions are intense...as was the smut! I'm off to read your other stories now. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! Sorry it took so long for me to respond. I am a bit of a dunce about using the PK response things. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/08/04
I LOVE this story! Please continue! It's the best! I love it! Please write more! |
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catloveSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/07/04
*Some say magic is intention made real.*
I loved both POVs; they work great in this story. It's fairly frustrating at first knowing that they both want each other but are not talking about it for they have the wrong impression about what's going on. I liked the references to the dress, too. |
Author Feedback: Better late than never on the response Sometimes I like writing from alternating POVs, and it seemed to work for this story. The angst comes from the reader knowing that Harry and Hermione want each other but each is unaware of the other's feelings. Her catching him like that was the mechanism for finally bring them together physically. I'm actually proud of the dress references; I worked hard on that aspect of the story, the uncompleted dress being a metaphor for Hermione's jumbled feelings. Thanks so much for reviewing |
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"And I can’t stop watching her, not even when she turns her head on the bed and looks me straight in the eye." I gasped out loud when I read that!
"Hermione, please don’t taunt me," he moans with tears in his eyes. "You don’t have to do this. I don’t want your pity." I cried when I read that.
A grin like sunrise spreads across Harry’s face. "I love you, Hermione," he whispers, almost pleading. "I’m in love with you. Please let me make love to you. I’ll never ask you for anything else as long as I live." Cried again. Yeah, I'm really sappy today!
LOVELY! I was a mess by the time I finished it and thankful that it ended so well. Loved the analogy of the dress--reminded me of Madonna's "Gonna Dress You Up In My Love". Hope you don't hate that song or anything.
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Author Feedback: Sorry I'm such a dunce about replying to reviews. I'm only logged in to PK on one computer and if I'm not on that computer, I don't see the "reply" feature.
I know you reviewed this a long time ago, but I wanted to thank you for your great review. You "got" all the things I wanted readers to "get". I'm actually not familiar with that Madonna song (*hides*) but as long as you think it fits that's fine with me I basically used the unfinished dress as a metaphor for Hermione's jumbled feelings. Thanks again and I promise I won't take so long to respond ever again |
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MollyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/07/04
awww, this story is soo cute, and alittle disturbing, but mostly cute haha! |
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wow! that ending gave me shivers! very well done! wonder what happens when ron gets home? |
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