This is soooo cute!!! That would be so awsome if i could do that with one of my friends!! Great Story!!!

That was a really good poem! I think it would work well with a story about Hermione looking through an old album of photos or something of the sort. the story was also very well written, much like you others. Keep up the great writing!

I absolutely love your stories.This was so sweet and funny.Your poem was wonderful, you should definately enter it into a competition.
Exellent work

~Rach

Ahhhhh, the short temper of fate. Yes, i definitely liked this story. Of course Harry would find out. Murphy's Law does, after all, apply in fictional worlds as well as real life.

Great fic! I absolutely loved it. I loved that Harry inadvertently told Hermione about his feelings for her. You did a wonderful job.

O, I loved both the poem and the story, they were great!!! And i don't think i've read another story like yours, great job !!!

that was the worst story i have ever heard
i hope you passion isnt writing cause ur not good at it!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like your poem...It's nice...really nice... I conjured some deep feelings inside my chest...hey, can I copy it? Promise I won't give it out as my own...I'll acknowledge you or anything for it...I'm just gonna keep it...I love the poem...you know...

i really liked the story and the poem u wrote was great

I loved the story and poem was really great! You are really talented with words! well i hope you write more stories (i'v read them all now) lol great job again!
~L~

i love that poem! its so cute and it is really christmasy (i know its not a word, but i just invented it, so THERE)

as i've said before, love your work, and keep writing! can't wait for your next story to come up!
please please PLEASE! un-pause the sequel to Depresssion!!! please please please! i love that story, even though i can't remember what its called... sorry bad memory....

GREAT POEM. i really loved that story. and it works well as a one shot. your right it did get a bit confusing but i worked it out. very in character i always love that. and what an amazing plot idea. very different and interesting. nice work. i look forward to reading more of your works

Trio

different but good

Not bad, but it could use some touch-ups. A little more even pacing, plus a few grammatical things could really make this fic shine.

Good work!