Intersting slant to the story, please continue would follow with interstest.

very nice start! Now where is the rest of your story? Why are you leaving those that visit your pages out in the cold?
Awake and finnish this NOW!!!!!!

you are an ausome arthur just make sure that u keep up with the good work of writing stories

hey you are the best arther keep you are good work up and try make more best stories like these ones here and thanx

dude this story is amazing you have got 2 rite more plz

hey,
nice story base and read it also. cant wait for next chapter.

this is really good i really like it you really should update

You should continue this great story. I'm impressed beyond words that this story seem's so spectactular and there is only one chapter I'm hoping that you'll continue with this story

I really enjoyed this first chapter! I love AU stories, and there just isn't enough of them out there! I can't wait to read more, hurry and update!!!

Awesome Start! You've got me hooked. I'm not much for AU but this is very cool. Hurry and post more. Everything in this story is perfect so far, grammer and all.

i belive i have read this before.
great work.

This is a brilliant fic, and I it!!!
I've heard of this title before from like ages ago on the Harry Potter website in the forums, i just wondred if it was the same one?!!. Could u e-mail me back please and please please post again soon!!