the fic was so beautiful...
although brutal...
but still it was nice and amazing....
altough short but still amaziing....
lol... yah, i know... beautiful...

well... its a short one but passes a huge message.
I loved it!

wow... thats really powerful. i mean i expected it to be like a really short angsty story but its really powerful. It shows Harry's emotions really well

Wow and....just wow.

If this is Dark Harry then I like him!

I love all your work but this story is my favourite.

Wow. That is all I have to say. You know, you are a very talented writer. It's amazing what can come ouot of being bored. Well done!

I think it's your best work yet. Very real. I like angsty, slightly crazy Harry and you wrote him very well. Can't wait for more!

Ok I'm twisted because I liked this. I could see Harry snapping. What can I say I DominantHarry, we never get to see enough of him in the fanfic world.

Great! I loved it. I will continue to read your work.

Great story! Keep it up. Hope to read more of your work in the future!

Geez chica - you should get bored more often!

It's erotic and yet sad at the same time. You paint such a tragic and passionate Harry - thankfully he has Hermione as his 'light at the end of the tunnel', as it were.

That was interesting. I would love to know what its part of, and if you have already started taht other story.

oh good cant wait to read the rest of the story i like this part

WOW THATS SO COOL
I LUV IT
WRITE ANOTHER WUN SOON PLZ
I LOVE STORIES LIKE THAT

oh my god. this was riveting. very disturbing, and fierce, and full of passion. and VERY VERY good! wow

Oh, I just loved this! I don't have any words to describe how perfect it is. Loved the part when he makes her say his name, and of course, the fact that he cries in the end is absolutely brilliant. Good job!