I LOVE this story! It just seems sooo right. This is how I imagined it would be for lily and james, slowly coming together, having serious talks. I loved it.

How sweet. I liked it, really. It was nice to see them just having a conversation. Most people never write stories where they just talk. But let me tell you, it was a nice change and I just wanted to say thanks for writing it. I think you captured both the characters really well.
Cheers, Moon

That was... absolutel-y BRILLIANT. Completely and utterly canon! You did James and Lily beautifully - not the stereotypically 2D Fanfiction characters that we see so often! And the descriptions of the setting: wintery Hogwarts: it was tangible.

You have atrue gift for writing.

I'd love to see more of your L/J work!

Awww that was so cute! I really enjoyed reading this one-shot- though I was hoping for a little more fluff (not even a kiss?), but it was very well written, I must say that.

i really luved the story, it was so beautiful and sweet, keep up the good work, i wonder what a h/hr version of this would be like?

*claps loudly and enthusiastically* that was wonderful, well written yet entertaining! yay

Quite nice..i like it alot....its good..what more should i say? i dont have any critisicm/advice to give!

Hi, I read this and loved it alot. It was good. You had really nice detail throughout it and each moment was brought out so that you could really get a feel for what was going on. I liked it a lot.

WOW!!!! i it!!! it's really good and i can't think of any critism. maybe you could add to it? that's the only thing i can think of though it's really well finished already.

I really liked this story - I liked how you wrote James' personality and how he gradual got under Lily's skin.
I assume the scar on James' cheek was the one caused by Snape's spell after the Defense O.W.L.?

Oh my gosh I love it! It's absolutely wonderful! Are you going to write more or is this a one shot??? Please write more! I love this! It's so cute. I laughed aloud at some parts. Keep writing!!!

-Emma Rose

That was the first L/J fic I've ever read and it was wonderful. I love the way you've made the conversation flow. A beautiful piece. Keep up the good work.

I've read this a hundred times and I still can't get enough of it. This is just the best. The bestbestbest fanfic ever. Believe me, I don't normally read fanfics over and over, trying to see if there's anything wrong with it. I've tried, and there's nothing wrong. Just... wow.

I've reviewed this already on Sugarquill.net, but let me just review this again. This is the best fic I've ever, ever, ever read. *worships Saiph again and again* That's saying something because I'm taking a Creative Writing degree myself, and I've never read a fanfic as good as 'Falling'. I've read this a hundred times already, and I'm not stopping. Believe me, it's THAT good. I swear I've almost memorized the dialogue, I could even recite them in my sleep.

I loved it

It was simply bloody well written and everything was described perfectly. But not in an overly described anoying way.

I liked that you made it all in one chapter instead of fragmenting it, it would have cut the great flow it has.

Both characters have depth and seem human.

I especially liked that James said that day could be considered as their first date and she agreed. It's a sweet little thing.

All in all it deserves a two thumbs up and a quick check on my part to see if you have written anything else.

-Az-