Once again, I loved this, and to think, most of this is entirely yours, I barely help at all on this story. You are a great writer and need to exercise this ability more often and share it with others. Thank you for sharing the writing you have and for allowing me in on some of the creative processes. It is a challenge and a joy.
I adore the way Harry told the "world" about himself and Hermione, it was delightfully romantic. I have always said, when you apply yourself, you have a very romantice soul.
Once again, great work. I loved your making Ron the voice of reason in this one, I think he deserved it after the way you treated him in your last story. I LIKE Ron, you know.
Well I should get back to it, you should should get back to work on the story you've started. I have to admit, it is going to surprise those who are used to only reading your fluff pieces.
Love,
Aunt Becky
I love the picture this story is based on, and I love this story. Go you!! 