Hi there,

WOW!! I think this is the best fic you wrote so far, except While You Were Sleeping, cuz its made based on my favorite movies of all time..
But I think I like it better, because the bunch are on more appropriate age than in the While You Were..I think you're my favorite writer in Portkey here beside Searcy and Bingblot

How long into the story until Harry and Hermione admit that they love each other?

This chapter was just a filler wasn't it? If it wasn't, it still made me want to finish reading the story. I think Harry and Hermione are gonna end up a couple(duh, right?) and Ron and Macey.

Heyy!!
God, where do I even start for this review? It's a brilliant fic with a very good plot. Harry/Hermione is weaved into it very well, and although the actual relationship doesn't for 20 chapters or so, it doesn't seem like that b/c there are little moments and talks between them that keep us going. It doesn't even feel like we're waiting 20/more chapters!
I thought Macey and Ron were very cute, and especially him buying her the kitten. The revealing of the relationships in the kitchen was sweet and funny, too.
Have to admit, the sweetest moment was when Hermione told Harry she loved him and he was so shocked. Ah, bless him! It was just so sad in a way, but so happy in another way. Mostly happy
I'm not going to read the rest of the epilogue, b/c I feel most stories are better w/o them -- with the obvious exception of a few -- and also, I'm not a fan of the loads of kids thing, b/c I can never keep track of them.
Anyway, it was a great fic. Only minus was the amount of grammar errors, but as I've said, it was a long time ago and you're grammar is obviously much improved now.
Yeah, so I loved this fic, and thought the relationships progressions were very good!! Very well built up.
Good fic,
xCNx

Have to say, this is very interesting and entertaining. Although, I can definitely see how much your writing has changed and improved as time passed. The grammar in this is, to be quite frank, terrible. I do realise that this was written a long time ago though and that you are much better with grammar now.
Also, I think the tub scene was very uncharacteristic of Hermione. Then again, it could also argued otherwise -- that she just doesn't care. However, I felt the uncomfortableness -- if that's a word! -- of that scene xD
I love the Quidditch set-up and Hermione's boyfriend. I've never read this type of fic -- Hermione as the PR and others on the team. I really like it! Very entertaining and I cant wait to see how this plays out.
Just wondering, what age are they? As in, what year is this set? Thats the real question I was asking, lol.
xCNx

Ha, i have gone on a bit of a binge in regards to all your fics, read most of them now bar the one shots and i must say i am rather addicted! By far my favourite author on this site, i love the little recuring motiffs and names that show up in each story lol! Please never stop writing, i love turning to your stories when i'm in the mood for a good h/hr romance, or just a romance for that matter

I think you left out one of thnpotter kids. Erin the one tha got scared by the snake.

I like the story so far. I'm glad you incorporated Macey not wantjg aNothe huge relationship right away. But I was wondering what happened to tv work obsessd hermionie? It seems like she didn't do anything so far. Just a little thought.

i really liked the part ( harry with little lily )it is wonderful, thanks

A magnificent story, filled with witty lines and excellent OC's. a masterpiece in every sense of the word! =-p

I absolutely love this story...great writing!
Its very descriptive and keeps ones attention throughout the entire story

I love this story. It's just so cute and fluffy. You have a very good writting style and will probably be the reason I fail my exams (half joking ) By the way, you forgot to put Erin on the Cheat Sheet.

Just wanted to tell you... this story is so awesome!

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i love this story!

great depiction of life after Hogwarts!

keep it up Harry\'s Mistress!