I like it! Please update soon! No offense to one-shot writers, but the stories that are practically novels or actually tell about almost or more than a year are my favorites, as long as they aren't rated R or NC17.

Please explain who Lindon and Reon are. Am I right in presuming that Lindon is the one trying to contact Harry by telepathy? Anyways, great chapter.

Hi, Nathan! I e-mailed you some time ago at the library, but you didn't return it! So bascically, my internet's gone and I can't go on the chat or ICQ at the library..So, I'll try and go to Katie's friend's house sometime soon and see what I can do. If that doesn't work, then I'll try and think of something else..I'm in high school, now! Cya soon!

~*Saberat Stoor*~

Cool! is it a good or bad guy?

have you ever read Eragon cauz this is kinda like it with telepath

hmmmmm....interrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrresting! kinda wierd too...is there any h n h???

hmmm...interesting...

Hmmmmmmm, very interesting! I can't wait to read more! Keep it up!!!

So far, so good. Going to the next chapter!

Good fic! Going to the next chapter!

Good story! Going to the next chapter!

very cool, very cliffhangy.

the only thing i found wrong was the repeated use of span, i think you mean spun. but i'd have to get a dictionary to check on that, right now i'm not sure what the correct form would be. but any way great job.