well i must admit that i was disappionted witg the whole ball scene in this chapter because you didnt put as much imagination into it you simply took the one from a chapter befor a chage a few things but other than that it was The same
BUT ON A HAPPIER NOTE i must say great story, i read it all in one siiting,the ending was wonderful though i would like an epilouge just to see wat happens w/ hermione and harry. plus if she left who would be the heir to the throne?
i really love the whole father and daughter scene at the end tho... really sweet
I do have another question though it said on your summary that their would be some ron and luna and some draco and ginny but all i have seen was a little i mean A LITTLE ron and luna but no draco and ginny at all
well good job
there were some things that i in particular did not like but all in all this was a good read
always,
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Hello..
I read your whole story last night.
It was great! I had some much fun!
^^
Are you going to do a epilogue?
Well..
I hope you are alright.
See ya! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 27/07/06
Now that you have finished can you please work on Baker Street Irregulars. It is one of my favorite FanFics and I would love to know what happens.
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CamiroxSigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 27/07/06
EXCELLENT story.  I hate myself for not reading it until this chapter came out! *bangs head on keyboard* Anyway, I really loved this story and you're a very talented writer! Don't let it go to waste.  Hope to see more of your stories soon! |
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Congratulations! This is one of the more original stories on this site, and it is quite well written as wel. I enjoyed reading it! |
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Congratulations! This is one of the more original stories on this site, and it is quite well written as wel. I enjoyed reading it! |
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I LOVED your adventure story! What a delightful romp! I think you did a great job of melding all of your story lines into one exciting fun adventure! Loved your AU Harry Ron Draco and especially Hermione! Really cute. Do somthing else soon! |
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DARN RIDDLE!!! DARN HIM TO HECK!!!!! AND DARN YOU! DARN YOU TO HECK!!!!!!!!!!! WHY DID YOU DO THAT?! THEY HAD TO BE CAUGHT!! AND DARN YOU TO HELL BECAUSE NOW I BELIEVE MALFOY! THE FERRET BOY! DAMN YOU!! hahhahahah lol! just kidding. I lOVE YO UR STORY! I WILL BE DONE WITH IT IN A SEC!!!!!!! YOU AND YOUR STORY WILL BE IN MY FAVES!!!!! WAIT, NO, IT IS IN MY STORY!! |
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I LOVE IT!!!! if it has HP or/and PIRATES OF THE CARIBBEAN in it, im willing to read it!!!!! |
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i never knew pirates could be so intresting!!! but i admit, when u put HP and PIRATES together, you get a pretty good combination!
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Wow. Utterly...wow. When I first read the summary, I was like, "oh, great, this sounds all kinds of cheesy." But you blew me away. It's well-researched, well-written, coherent, and actually believable. It could even pass off as maybe the past lives of the real characters, or an alternate universe, or something. Amazing job.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 26/07/06
ok i love it, but theres one problem...well i know this is AU and all, but Hermione should be more strong and level headed...
if Remus and Snape were her tutors, then they probably would have taught her some sword tactics-since you already mentioned that they taught her about pirots...
she wouldnt be this little girl sitting on the side, waiting for someone to save her-since this is based on how Hermione would be, knowing her, she'd probably try and figure out a way to get out of situations herself-
oh and also, since she's read so much about all these pirots, she would most likely know more about all the things going on there, instead of being totally clueless...WELL, that was just a little of my openion...dont lisnten to me...just a babbling, clueless person...loll
ok ok ill just shut up now, and compliment on how well it is up to here...
~no body to pay attention to~ |
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Fantastic! It's so sad to see this story ending. It's been a favorite of mine for so long. Every thing about it was wonderful, exciting, action-packed, fun, romantic, and anything else I could ever hope to find in a story. The characters were written with great depth and the pirate terminology and history was so interesting and incredibly well researched. Harry and Hermione were perfect together, in every way shape and form. Every wait was always worth the next chapter. I'm just sad to see it end. It was a fun ride. Hope to read more from you soon! Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! |
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greendotSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 26/07/06
I love a good pirate story! This looks like it's going to be pretty good. |
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My draw dropped when i saw this story again, No offense but i thought you might have died or something, not updates in how long! You made up for it well in this chapter. Thank you for finishing this brilliant story, i love everything in it. Very original and the was its interlaced with otehr stories is impressive. I just wish the final chapter was a bit longer. I'm incredibly thrilled to reread this story and thank you again for the entertainment. Well done indeed. |
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