well i must admit that i was disappionted witg the whole ball scene in this chapter because you didnt put as much imagination into it you simply took the one from a chapter befor a chage a few things but other than that it was The same
BUT ON A HAPPIER NOTE i must say great story, i read it all in one siiting,the ending was wonderful though i would like an epilouge just to see wat happens w/ hermione and harry. plus if she left who would be the heir to the throne?
i really love the whole father and daughter scene at the end tho... really sweet
I do have another question though it said on your summary that their would be some ron and luna and some draco and ginny but all i have seen was a little i mean A LITTLE ron and luna but no draco and ginny at all
well good job
there were some things that i in particular did not like but all in all this was a good read
always,

SilverCrystal