CryHopeUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/06/03
Wow.... ok.... this is definately the best one shot fic that i've ever read in my entire life! I mean wow....!!!! I start crying at how romantic the whole ball seemed to be. And i could jsut feel the love from this fic. It was truly wonderful, how i could feel as if i was there, at the very Great Hall, watching love unrevealed by Harry and Hermione. It was like magic... and real love. |
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Excellent fluff! I love how the story flows so easily and comes back together at the end. Wonderful job |
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XhaLeUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/06/03
Made me cry, darn you. |
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oliviaUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/06/03
that is SO sweet. i almost cried. you MUST write more like this!!
unbelivably brilliant! |
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JennyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/06/03
That was really good and quite touching!! Great job. |
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SophieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/04/03
This is amazing! I love it! I came across it by chance...and i'm so glad i did! Its brilliantly written and a great story!! Great writing, Keep goin! Sophie X |
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BingblotUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/03/03
Just beautiful!! I loved it!! Thank you!!! |
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This fanfic is exquisite and complete in itself - I was moved to tears. Thank You . . . . |
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BUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/02/03
I really like it. it's quite interesting to describe thier feeling through the third person POV. The way they look and always seek each other, it's so romantic. I hope you keep writing the fiction. If you write a new HP fiction , I will absolutely read it. |
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SilverleafUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/02/03
It is with absolute wonder that I review this incredible story.
I am not what you would call a sentimental person by any means. So, for me to have tears in my eyes after reading this fic, is something I never expected.
I applaud you on one of the best Harry Potter Fanfics I have ever read.
Silverleaf |
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i am for ONCE competely and uterly SPEECHLESS!!!!!
*FAINTS* *WAKES UP AND SMILES DREAMILY TO HERSELF*
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CarrieUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/03
Wow... that was a faboulous story. I give it much applauding... |
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kristinUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/01/03
Not sure what to make of this story. Some parts were very confusing. And I had to wonder what a medi-wizard did in the Muggle world to earn the title "Dame" from the Queen of England. I think having so many random characters tell a story is an interesting idea, but I'm not sure it worked here. I found that I really didn't care about Dame Rivers or even Harry and Hermione's children. Also, this is like the second time I've seen the horrible name "Rhiannon" used in Potter fan fiction. What's up with that? All in all, a good effort, but could use a lot of clarifications. |
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angel_22Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/01/03
Wow. That was one of the best Harry and Hermione stories I have read. |
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I just have to say that this is the BEST short fluffy fic, you were great with the detail and it was so sweet, I gotta get to class and now I'm all gooey eyed! This was so sweet and enjoyable! You should write ALOT more fic's like this!
luv
Ann
P.S. I absoloutly Love this story!  |
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