Beautiful... just beautiful

Beautiful Facade. I was reading this and thought hey this fits that picture there is a challenge about then DUH I read the authors note.

Gol

I'd give you a 20! That was beautiful, and your deep mechanical structure, magnificent! Keep writing!

Going.....into....diabetic........shock................way too sweet. Okay, all kiding aside, nice story, sweet.

That was pretty damn great. Good job!
Cass

Nice and short. Unfortunately, this is not long enough for me to give out a full mark. It is good, nevertheless.

The way this story was written is so different from the usual ones I read.
It is amazing... It is just like watching a slow-motion movie. It is really sweet!
Great work!

Nice and sweet.

Wow ....you can read into a scene so well. I always feel drawn into them, and never want the chapters to end. So go thank you for taking up the challenge.

Victor

*sigh* that was just.. wow.. it was like everything happened in this slow flowing motion.. the kiss was simple yet it was warming and and.. i cannot find the right words to describe it. i do hope you get the idea.

Awww! That's so cute. I mean, it's kind of distant and it's got that...space. It has space in it and...ack. It's hard to explain. Anyway, it's good. By good I mean great. Yay you.

Beautiful, simply beautiful.

Love it

So beautiful and simple! The language used was almost poetic and the descriptions are great