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what happened
aaaaahhhhhhhhhh
please write another chapter my lady
please
with whipped cream and a cheery on top!!!!?????
love,
your reader

I'll be perfectly honest with you - I spaced out and didn't get after the Quidditch game. Totally got lost. It was still perfect. I read the kiss part - got that. Wonderfully beautiful. Great writing, AWESOME JOB

aw i like it! it's so sweet! awesome job loved it..i love all your stories, you are an awesome writer! great job!

Masterfully written once again! I really like how you played on the fact that a simple look, smile, touch can communicate so much deeper than words. Cheers!

beautiful! awesome awesome story! it was great! i loved it..loved the small amount of dialouge..definitely not needed it was great! awesome job!

awww! harry's adorable! the handholding was so cute and harrylike!

Awww, Sandra, you did it again! Excellent, excellent job! I for one would never be able to pull off writing a story that didn't use any dialouge. But you pulled it off nicely! Way to go!

Christine

Awww! thats sweet

*Whipes tear from eye* How sweet! I love it! Very well written. The narrative is very descriptive while be very to-the-point.

I love it. The wording is excellent as well.

Really sweet! I like the end and how you end the story with a kiss!

That was so beautiful! I'm truly impressed how you managed to write such a wonderful piece out of a Quidditch Match.

You have an amazing talent to portray emotions! Congratulations!

*checks to-do list*
do half of nephew's homework - check.
do some accounting stuff - check
unwind a bit by reading a fic or two --- CHECK!

Wow, this is beautiful work! You have a talent for describing your characters' emotions well. I usually ask for more dialogue in a story, but this one is quite fine. You described the scenes so well, it felt effortless for me to picture them in my mind.

The beta in me spotted a few grammar errors (and one or two misspellings). But they don't detract from the overall beauty of the story.

I would give this a 9.75, but fractional scores are not allowed here. So okay, I'll round it off to 10.

very sweet.

Awww.... so cute. Really well written. Good Job!

I think the only words that can be used here is ... "WOW!"

This is so beautifully written, so tightly worded ... and yet packing within it something truly wonderful and lovingly sentimental and beautiful.

There are a few typos and spelling errors that I caught which, however, does not detract that much from the total impact of the story.

More, please?

gil