 wow it was not just smut but really sentimental. so our harry was a little man whore. interesting stupid ho chang. |
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really really sweet. and really really bold for hermione. i have always imagined her being capable to do something like that. i like this. |
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Was the devil handing out frozen popsicles to Hitler and Mussolini?
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wow... that was... wow! heh. I have no words for it, it was great the way you were able to fill in all the gaps while not... at the same time, somewhat. it's great
keep it up
-megz-
p.s. what did malfoy say? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/07/07
question... what did malfoy say about hermione that made harry react that way? |
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Fantastic story! You write Harry and Hermione so well together. Very loving and having a very strong heat between them. Everything flowed perfectly! Great work! |
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minaSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/06/05
wicked! nice fic! great fic, in fact i loved it it was soo sweet not to mention hot!  great writing, i loved the hell hitler parts that was funny!  and poor harry...but harry a ladies man...that is new!  is there a sequal??? please? this is sooo good! |
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Wow, this was a really great story. So much content, and a real plot! Great job |
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...until Hermione had come and blown his mind.
^that's not all she blew! lmao
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TreckSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 06/11/04
snip: They were embarking on a brand-new journey, one that promised to be exciting and tumultuous. From best friends to red-hot lovers, literally overnight - it would not be easy. Voldemort was still out there, psychotically salivating for Harry's blood. There were Death Eater arses to be kicked, Hagrid's death to be avenged. There was Ron to inform about this new twist in the dynamics of the Trio - Merlin, she certainly wasn't looking forward to that particular conversation. It was bound to be awkward, to put it mildly.
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That in of itself would make a great sequel. |
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This is a cute little story I like it.
Aphroditee
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 11/09/04
I really enjoyed this story if you do add any chapters to it please let me know I would really liked to read them. thank you for your story. |
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great story...let me know when you have another one up and running...
candice |
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Yaaaay and a third chapter! I'm so jealous of Hermione right now...I wish my first time had been that ridiculously hot...instead of just plain ridiculous
You balance the smut with some very witty humour so well, Fiona. I'm sitting here all like *guh*, and then I'm suddenly cracking up at things like:
"Albino piece of shit? If the situation were not so grave, she'd have laughed out loud." (I totally laughed out lound, situation be damned!)
And the fact that Harry was thinking of Uncle Vernon, of all things, while he was kissing Hermione. So funny. So Harry. Great work!!! Keep it up!!
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Oh my god there was another chapter. I had no idea...I just reviewed, and then WHAM! It was like, "on to the next chapter?" and I was like, "NEXT CHAPTER?! Is she trying to kill me?!" Wow...this one was just as good as the last. I'm all tingly and warm now. And so terribly jealous of Hermione.
Oh, and this -- "Well, score one for Miss Bookworm, Cocksucker Extraordinaire!" -- hilarious. |
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