TiredEyesSigned | Chapter : 14 | Date : 18/10/09
I absolutely LOVED your story! Harry and Hermione were just too cute, that first scene when Harry was trying to teach Hermione to fly felt so right it actually melted my heart.
And I loved how Ron wasn't a big jerk in this..I just hate it when people destroy the Golden Trio to make room for some HHr..it doesn't seem right, it's like taking the easy way out..it was perfect how Ron stood up to Bellatrix when she bashed Sirius, and I loved how he reacted to hearing the prophecy. Thank you so much for writing it! I'm definately going to read the sequel, and I just know it will be as good as this! |
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Raven3182Signed | Chapter : 14 | Date : 24/09/09
Very good story. I've never read anything quite like it before; having Hermione start with the dreams etc. was an interesting development. Thanks for writing! |
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married!?!?!?!? crazy sauce,,,didnt see that coming.
I'll think about readin the sequel, it all depends... |
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ohh. This is getting better every chapter. DOn't le tme down now, I've only got a couple more.
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ahh. you are right, good at cliffhangers. Is that your secret to keep me reading?
perhaps.
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whoa! what just happened? was it a dream or did she predict that it'd happen? ahhhh! no time to review! must read!
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oh wow, I certainly did not see this turn of events in the near future. I hope nothing happens. I hope ron will stop being so nosy too.
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whoa...cliffhanger...gotta go read..sorry...umm...CHRISTMAS MAKES ME HAPPY, I'm glad their together and hope that you have a new storyline brewing.
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The ring glows red for Harry Potter. I know it! PAH!! look at me getting so heated up...
blablabla your story is good, I like the little twists here and there, and that you don't uproot your story with a big turn or any huge change in the story. It's nice and consistent.
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I don't think I like snape right now. I believe that this story is just going to get more interesting. I hope so too, because I sometimes won't finish a story that I lose interest in.
I really hope that doesn't happen, cause I like this story a lot. I have been this angsty in a while.
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awesome turn of events, I wasn't expecting harry to be so open. I think the Krum thing is a misunderstanding though, and that she still loves harry.
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I must say, that I'm really impressed. your writing is of a caliber I see not every day. I love this story so much...
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ooohhhh...very nice.
I hope he gets further training. but we have all the time in the world for that now don't we. with a whole sequel posted and everything, this could be nothing but romance, and I wouldn't' care.
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Oh m y gosh i love how you write. The perfect grammar and a good story line.
I lovce it.
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This story, even to this day, contains probably my favorite line from any fic I've ever read:
“That's no excuse! I'm standing right in front of you and you sure haven't figured out that I'm in love with you!”
Gah! I've read it so many times and it still gets me. I don't know if you're around Portkey anymore, but I thought you should know that, regardless. ^^ |
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