This story, even to this day, contains probably my favorite line from any fic I've ever read:

“That's no excuse! I'm standing right in front of you and you sure haven't figured out that I'm in love with you!”

Gah! I've read it so many times and it still gets me. I don't know if you're around Portkey anymore, but I thought you should know that, regardless. ^^

I think that was one of the best fic i have ever read and it has a sequel!!

I loved it great job

wow i really really loved readin this fic, sorry to hear its gonna be over but atleast there is the sequel

wow i really really loved readin this fic, sorry to hear its gonna be over but atleast there is the sequel

wow i really really loved readin this fic, sorry to hear its gonna be over but atleast there is the sequel

wow i really really loved readin this fic, sorry to hear its gonna be over but atleast there is the sequel

You haven't told us what happened to Tonks. coz something should have happened to her after all it's the end of the year and she is the Defense against the Dark arts teacher and the job is jinxed so that no one could last for more than a year, but, nothings happened to her.

i must say i love your story and your writing style. you are quite good ad keeping the plot hidden, many other writers would of been more obvious. you easily diverted attention to some major plot twists, like bagman as a spy and krum as a death eater, with information about harry and hermiones' relationship. cant wait to read the second part of the story.

Wow...that was amazing....and there's even a sequel! *jumps for joy and runs off to read*

Nice story, but it is not clear if some of Hermione's dreams were Voldemort inspired or some kind of precog. How much was Voldeshorts influencing the two of them, and he is so afraid of love, why could he abuse their bond?

oh what the fucking merlin's toe is fucking how did bloody harry kill voldermort? just by kissing hermione he pushed him away just like that? no way no how no butt in merlin's wart that is the way it ended fanfic Au or not. sheesh and you've written quite a nice story but the ending sucks toes!!!!!!!

absolutely brilliant u wrote really brilliant fic cant wait to read ur sequel

Ok, there was only two think that don'r make much sense in this story: Hermione using Hedwige and that their becoming a couple hadn't make first page in the Prophet, after all they didn't made a secret of it...
Biside that i liked it.

great story but I have a huge favor you can partake in or not ,or if you know of a story you can email me. But what I want to see is a story of course H/Hr with Draco good But still not really friends with harry until he finds him self living with harry at the dursleys for his protection against his dad. So sence I like you writing style I was wonder if you could do a story like that or know of one thanks and great work.
Ps. please no telapaty sp? if you do, do itI hate that

ahhh!ok im just on chaptrer 6("Harry’d be the poster boy for birth control!"that made me crack up for like a minute)an i just realized....what if it Victor Krum!hmmm.....i just have to wit and see wont i .

oh yeah.Love it.