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Unravelings

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brad
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/07/06
Very nice. Particularly liked the part with Harry 'continuing the tradition'. Thanks for the story!
 

bongy14
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/04/06
This was such a fabulously beautiful story. I won't lie --I was positively glued to the screen from start to finish.
Everything about it was so sweet, and you definitely should stay proud of this; it's one of the best one-shots I've ever read.
 

Starlight623
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/04/06
*sigh* Wonderful job!!

I think the entire relationship between Harry and Hermione can be summed up in these lines:
“Isn’t this the part where you’re supposed to say that I’m not an idiot and that you love me too?”

Hermione flashed him an innocent look. “Sure. But then I’d be lying and lying is bad and you were an idiot. I’d be forcing you in a painful denial.”

I loved it!!
 

_Half_Blood_Princess_
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/04/06
That was no corny at all!! Loved it to piecies!!

Just can't stop loving this one! I'm so looking forward to more of you... Guess you have a great collection!

Keep up!

Cheerios,
Joanne
 

skyace
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/12/05
It is so simple, and yet so beautiful. Love it

OoH. Too bad she never did stash Ron's body somewhere!
 

Harmonious Life
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/12/05
Wow! I feel all warm and fuzzy. This was a great story-- just like the description of their first kiss; not too sweet, not too demanding, but a perfect fit. I loved the characterizations of Harry, Hermione, and Ron. Great work! Bravo!
 

yeti
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/09/05
hi!
well, you have every right to be proud of this, it's so sweet. when Hermione found this book on her bed I felt warmth spreading in my stomach wonderful feeling, all thanks to you. it was a great read and it made me smile. thank you
 

Azusena
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/05
"She felt betrayed. It was bad enough that their friendship or whatever was between them was called. @I think you’ve got an unfinished sentence here. “…was called…” what?@ You should know me, she wanted to snap. What the hell have you been doing these past seven years if you don’t? She turned away, tears threatening to spill. It seemed all she was doing was trying not to cry.'
you might want to fix this, but other than that i thought it was awesome i loved it!!! Great job!!!
 

alexiswinn
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/08/05
I love this. And even after HBP, I still think that this just might be how Harry & Hermione might fall in love, if they ever do. Hermione has always been the insightful one, so it is unsurprising that she would be the one to realize her feelings first. Harry, being the typical blind boy the he always has been, would be a dunce about his feelings. You've managed to capture the characters well, which says a lot since this is your first story and JKR just released a new book. Great job. Wonderful job.
 

Harmonious Life
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/05
Wow, this was really beautiful. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. With some stories I want to skip ahead to the "good parts," but you had my attention the whole way through. Lovely!
 

Sage Vale
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/05/05
I luv Alias too, Vaughn's a hottie!!!! And they're together again!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! This story was cool. Just wondering, your name sounds awfully familiar, do you write Alias fanfics?--Sage
 

Giancarla
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/03/05
That was a very sweet read. The story had a soft and light air, but the romance was clearly felt. I especially loved the part with the dedication on the book. The notion of a continued love affair was so nice. Good job on your fanfic!
 

freudian slip
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/03/05
Oh effing gag me with a silver spoon. That's so god damned cheesy, it's great. Pour on the cheese.
 

pcgrimmy
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/03/05
Oh yeah! This was so sweet. I think this is the first story of yours I've ever read. I look forward to reading more.
 

Flabbergasted
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/03/05
Ahhh Chrissy! YOU wrote FLUFF?! I'm shocked and amazed!!! It was wonderful fluff, the best I've ever read. I think that nothing can top this. You're just that damned good. Only you can write something in a style that you don't particularly favor and have it come out better than any other of it's kind. I loved it, it was positively amazing. The part with her counting the weeks/days/hours/minutes/seconds thing was fucking awesome. Wonderful effect. Anyhow hun, just wanted to fangirl ya a bit. Hope to talk to you soon.

-Ash
 

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